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      I thought you were different, I thought you had changed, but all i see now, is one and the same. I thought you liked me, I thought it was a start, but all I'm left with, is a hole in my heart.
 
  You told me to trust you, To give you a chance, Now I stand here alone, As we finish this dance. A moment has passed, And you are now gone, I stand by myself, "what did I do wrong." You say that's just life, Now ready or not, You come and you go, Without even a thought. Well now that it's over, I see all the clues, You really don't care, and now my heart's bruised. You have the words, written right on your neck, A life you have lived, Without remorse or regret. And when you have read this, I'll already be gone, You can't ask me to stay, and live a life that's all wrong. I've left you my heart, My soul and my dreams, Now I'm just a shell, Who's bust at the seams. I can honestly say, That through it all, Best to have loved and then lost, than to not love at all.  | 
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     I thought you were different, I thought you had changed, but all i see now, is one and the same. I thought you liked me, I thought it was a start, but all I'm left with, is a hole in my heart. You told me to trust you, To give you a chance, Now I stand here alone, As we finish this dance. A moment has passed, And you are now gone, I stand by myself, "what did I do wrong." You say that's just life, Now ready or not, You come and you go, Without even a thought. Well now that it's over, I see all the clues, You really don't care, and now my heart's bruised. You have the words, written right on your neck, A life you have lived, Without remorse or regret. And when you have read this, I'll already be gone, You can't ask me to stay, and live a life that's all wrong. I've left you my heart, My soul and my dreams, Now I'm just a shell, Who's bust at the seams. I can honestly say, That through it all, Best to have loved and then lost, than to not love at all. It is a tale felt all too often. I hear an echo of words said before, from ancient times.  | 
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      I can actually "feel" it...very nice.  
    
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      Thanks both of ya'll I just wish I was as good as showing my emotions through writing as some people on here
     
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        earthytaurus76
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        Fri 07/31/09 07:38 PM
       
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      You forgot to add.. "YOU PSYCHO *****!!! I HOPE YOU FALL OFF A CLIFF!!! THANKS FOR MAKING OUT WITH MY FRIENDS!! GLAD YOULL BE THERE TIL THE END!!!
     
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      "Best to have loved and then lost, than to not love at all. "
 
  A line never so true...   
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