tumble with me

I can't save you
because i am saving me
from me and this is alot
of work for many if any
to see me like this so
anti-mute staring at
a tube congested
yes until when I will
work on me then i am
ready

no rush to be steady

let's have fun

play walk F in run

fall get up sleep

fall asleep with me

tumble in my sheets

lips like wind

carrying tumble weeds

most things I can mend

just not relationships

where it takes time

to patch up the faults

where it was my fault

or her fault something

is damaged and glue

can only hold so long

as it doesn't bind

us as we fly free

as do

tumble

weeds

Sounds as if to speak, you wish to make her knees so weak.
These summer time passing seeds, of the tumble weeds.

Great write bro..

I just want woman to know I am not perfect. Never will be. I am not going to try. I am me and my perspectives. When you start living a relationship according to rules, this is where the decline comes in.
I am willing to adapt and comprimise just don't expect too much as I don't expect much. This is where the pressure builds and the temperature rises in another direction. Fingers and accusations are made when things don't work out.

I think people put too much pressure on themselves and others most times in a way that seems naturally easier to get frustrated with someone as much as they are frustrated with themselves. It's hard to love someone when your not happy. when you feel like a rock lying next to another rock. You know neither one is moving and both feel cold.

Tumbleweeds move by wind.
Humans move with motivation.
They are two in the same.



I have a new fondness for tumbleweeds.


A tumbleweed is not so free, it just so happens
the wind makes it seem.

This was cool!!.....cheers man....

The poem is great but I think I like this even better. Just you ... being real ...

very heart felt.
((((d4tc))))

I agree with ArtGurl, I loved the poem but this sounds like your heart...