For Every Path....

With every newborn life
An adventure must begin,
With every passing moment
An adventure soon must end.

For every wish that's granted
A freedom's lost it's choice,
For every vote that's counted
A vote has lost it's voice.

Take heed in life's decisions
And always give to thought
For outcomes play a part
Where "why" is always sought.

Be careful what you wish for
The words you wish to say
Be careful what may happen
In giving thoughts such faith.

There are many sides to life
Too many, to be sure
Two sides always opposing
One brazen, one demure.

Be given unto wisdom
And less into what's craved
For redemption is a road
That's seldom ever paved.

Fadedspirit 7/28/2009

Wise words, thanks for the share.

But, Faded, what if I'm just backasswards?

Good write {{{Fade}}}
Also good to see you in here again!
Hope all is well.

Good write and so good to see you

Strong write...Ty for sharing your wisdom...

The one thing I might think or feel differently about, if I have understood you correctly, is concerning "redemption."

To me it seems that many people inherently, by way of their human and divine Spirit, gravitate towards giving redemption and receiving it as often as possible on their journey towards knowing their own wholeness, and the wholeness of others.

What do you think about this scenario Faded?

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Thank you BonnyMiss and you're very welcome.

LOL DKW....For those of us that are backasswards, I just say sit back and enjoy the ride. hee hee

Good to see you again also (((MsTeddyBear)))! All is well here. Thanks for commenting.

Aww, thanks pkh, it's good to see you as well.

Thanks AngelLight

I agree wholeheartedly with your scenario, I like the way its phrased by the way. The redemption that is refered to here is an inward redemption of the self, something that a lot of people struggle with. Maybe it makes better sense understanding it that way.


Aww, thanks writer_gurl, I'm glad you liked it.

Wow, that was great.
Thanks for sharing.

very enjoyable for me.