Topic: Define Love
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Tue 07/28/09 05:01 AM

Define Love in it's truest meaning,
Say what you feel, and quit schemeing,
Pain is caused from a heart of a liar,
Define those emotions of desire,
Define the false feelings of love,
Spoken with control the thoughts of,
Sadness left for the one who believed,
Define Love such as you received,
Explaine the pain and sadness you left
the one, to go through,
Instead you walk away and say you didn't know
what to do,
Define the journey I must travel down,
Alone, getting over you while you're still around,
Search no more to know where I will be,
Your feelings were never true to me,
Love Define: something we do,
True to it's word actions seen,
You feel with a mind a scripted scene,

Wrote By: Carol Lee
My own experience from a relationship that was a LIE..
Thank you for reading.









John1932's photo
Tue 07/28/09 05:18 AM
wow, thats deep. I like it...

May777's photo
Tue 07/28/09 05:28 AM
:cry: flowerforyou

can totally negate

pkh's photo
Tue 07/28/09 06:23 AM
welcome

carold's photo
Tue 07/28/09 06:58 AM
Welcome Carol :) flowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 07/28/09 07:00 AM
Welcome


Tammy:heart:

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Tue 07/28/09 07:01 AM
flowerforyou drinker

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Tue 07/28/09 07:36 AM


Define Love in it's truest meaning,
Say what you feel, and quit schemeing,
Pain is caused from a heart of a liar,
Define those emotions of desire,
Define the false feelings of love,
Spoken with control the thoughts of,
Sadness left for the one who believed,
Define Love such as you received,
Explaine the pain and sadness you left
the one, to go through,
Instead you walk away and say you didn't know
what to do,
Define the journey I must travel down,
Alone, getting over you while you're still around,
Search no more to know where I will be,
Your feelings were never true to me,
Love Define: something we do,
True to it's word actions seen,
You feel with a mind a scripted scene,

Wrote By: Carol Lee
My own experience from a relationship that was a LIE..
Thank you for reading.

This sounds like my past experiences to,wink.


It was you who lied to me,
looking straight into my eyes.
You spoke to only give your lie's.
All for what, to get me in bed,
Or for fun to fu@k with my head.
Time and life will carry on great.
But as for you in my mind your already dead.


Life will hurt and true love will hide.
Just be glad your still able to share life's ride.
Your poem here is cool, and I am sorry you even met THAT FOOL!
Keep on writting and living to find real,wink..











Fusion99's photo
Tue 07/28/09 07:55 AM


Define Love in it's truest meaning,
Say what you feel, and quit schemeing,
Pain is caused from a heart of a liar,
Define those emotions of desire,
Define the false feelings of love,
Spoken with control the thoughts of,
Sadness left for the one who believed,
Define Love such as you received,
Explaine the pain and sadness you left
the one, to go through,
Instead you walk away and say you didn't know
what to do,
Define the journey I must travel down,
Alone, getting over you while you're still around,
Search no more to know where I will be,
Your feelings were never true to me,
Love Define: something we do,
True to it's word actions seen,
You feel with a mind a scripted scene,

Wrote By: Carol Lee
My own experience from a relationship that was a LIE..
Thank you for reading.



I like the flow and the rage!devil Nicely done!love love

MzEm's photo
Tue 07/28/09 09:00 AM
Nice work, welcome Carol...

AngelLight's photo
Tue 07/28/09 12:55 PM
Nice to meet you Carol...

Ty for sharing your write

I join with others in welcoming you waving

d4tc's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:43 PM
I wrote this last night. Wasn't sure what to do with it until i saw your write. flowerforyou



True'est of Colors


Lies realize
they're alive
despite trustless

happy people
cuss less

the truth
cuts less

they will always
know who you are
by your eyes
and tongue



MzEm's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:46 PM

I wrote this last night. Wasn't sure what to do with it until i saw your write. flowerforyou



True'est of Colors


Lies realize
they're alive
despite trustless

happy people
cuss less

the truth
cuts less

they will always
know who you are
by your eyes
and tongue





Diggin' the add on as well as the original poem...Nice work both of you...

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 07/28/09 01:55 PM
Ditto-ing MzEm and all the welcome(s)

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 07/28/09 05:48 PM
flowerforyou Welcome to the site flowerforyou