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Topic: Gracefully ~
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 07/27/09 11:26 AM Edited by AngelLight on Mon 07/27/09 11:27 AM
~ Gracefully ~ Sitting in silence face to face, gazing into the truth of telling eyes. Touching hands, the sands of time stop. We are still, filled with quiet wonder and awe inside this pregnant moment. Knowing tonight is once again new you tenderly caress my hair, prepared to open your heart, baring your Soul like a child who harbors no fear. You are solitaire. Yes, a diamond shining in the reflection of your own inner light, excited by what you perceive to be the sheer beauty of life and love. No withholding Stories unfolding We are... ...gracefully... beholding... ~© JDS 07/27/2009~

lonetar25 Joined Mon 05/18/09 Posts: 3531	Mon 07/27/09 11:34 AM
nice

KAYK9 Joined Sat 05/23/09 Posts: 1	Mon 07/27/09 11:34 AM
Thats a nice poem! Very deep and understanding.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 07/27/09 11:40 AM
nice Ty lone

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 07/27/09 11:41 AM
Thats a nice poem! Very deep and understanding. I appreciate that Kay, ty. ..it's nice to meet you

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Mon 07/27/09 11:42 AM
Wonderful write, you blew me away once again...

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Mon 07/27/09 12:10 PM
~ Gracefully ~ Sitting in silence face to face, gazing into the truth of telling eyes. Touching hands, the sands of time stop. We are still, filled with quiet wonder and awe inside this pregnant moment. Knowing tonight is once again new you tenderly caress my hair, prepared to open your heart, baring your Soul like a child who harbors no fear. You are solitaire. Yes, a diamond shining in the reflection of your own inner light, excited by what you perceive to be the sheer beauty of life and love. No withholding Stories unfolding We are... ...gracefully... beholding... ~© JDS 07/27/2009~ You are the diamond!, nice write

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 07/27/09 01:32 PM
Wonderful write, you blew me away once again... Thanks a lot Emmy

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 07/27/09 01:34 PM
~ Gracefully ~ Sitting in silence face to face, gazing into the truth of telling eyes. Touching hands, the sands of time stop. We are still, filled with quiet wonder and awe inside this pregnant moment. Knowing tonight is once again new you tenderly caress my hair, prepared to open your heart, baring your Soul like a child who harbors no fear. You are solitaire. Yes, a diamond shining in the reflection of your own inner light, excited by what you perceive to be the sheer beauty of life and love. No withholding Stories unfolding We are... ...gracefully... beholding... ~© JDS 07/27/2009~ You are the diamond!, nice write Fusion, ty for reading and for your kindness!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 07/27/09 06:30 PM
nicely written angel

maleah Joined Thu 07/16/09 Posts: 324	Mon 07/27/09 06:46 PM
beautiful..like you

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Tue 07/28/09 12:48 AM
Smooth like buttah!!! Beautiful!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/28/09 12:35 PM
nicely written angel Thanks K....

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/28/09 12:43 PM
beautiful..like you Hi sweet maleah Ty for reading, and for such a lovely compliment. Right back atcha..

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/28/09 12:45 PM
Smooth like buttah!!! Beautiful! ~Smiling...thanks g/f!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 07/28/09 05:56 PM
Beautiful... {{{AngelLight}}}

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 07/28/09 06:13 PM
Lovely, AngelLight!!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/28/09 10:18 PM
Beautiful... {{{AngelLight}}} Hey there Sweet Lady! Ty for your input, and ty for your warmth

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/28/09 10:19 PM
Lovely, AngelLight!! Hi Lily Ty!

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Wed 07/29/09 05:32 AM
Soft gentle and serene, yet strong and powerful.