Topic: through the window
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Sun 07/26/09 05:51 PM
The same window and the same view
Diluted by a heart once true
The grass was brown but viewed as green
The sky was black though blue was seen
The rain poured down each sunny day
Though skin felt wet hopes eyes betrayed
The world is not what once believed
Happiness shown was not retrieved

Close the shades and return to sleep
Shut down a mind that thinks too deep
The scenes the same in dark or light
Believed as good in black or sight

Sometimes ones faith can dissipate
A solid turned to gaseous state
Hope was dissolved within clogged air
Too many fates existing there
A cloud of smoke survives within
By bitter gasp its taken in
Coughs can't relieve the empty pain
That saw the sun within just rain

Windows deceived a heart of hope
With sincere view mind couldn't cope
Ignored what's true as light of day
Painted sunlight where there's just gray

Window open, window closed
Eyes awake or eyes disposed
One's hands can't shut the vacant view
And lonely eyes now see what's true
The world is full of black and gray
Pain grows in strength each passing day
Eyes hold new view, a different scene
Windows the same, but truth is seen



MzEm's photo
Sun 07/26/09 05:54 PM
Nicely done...

no photo
Sun 07/26/09 06:16 PM

Nicely done...


thank youflowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Sun 07/26/09 06:18 PM
Tremendous insight, thank you.

Broken Glass

Were I blind,
Would I perceive,
Which is window
Curtain sheathed?
A door that starts,
Within mid wall,
Longer legs,
Or heightened small.
Upon the floor.
Where bearing places,
Open view,
Becomes small spaces.
Eyes the vista,
View only holes,
When the choice,
It shares the soul.

Raine Les 7/26/2009

no photo
Sun 07/26/09 06:23 PM

Tremendous insight, thank you.

Broken Glass

Were I blind,
Would I perceive,
Which is window
Curtain sheathed?
A door that starts,
Within mid wall,
Longer legs,
Or heightened small.
Upon the floor.
Where bearing places,
Open view,
Becomes small spaces.
Eyes the vista,
View only holes,
When the choice,
It shares the soul.

Raine Les 7/26/2009


WOW!! thank you, that is beautiful and insightful

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Sun 07/26/09 06:31 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zrK5u5W8afc&feature=related

My Love

I await for you

I need your touch

Time can do so much,

So i await

For you,

Only for you!

flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 07/26/09 09:00 PM
very nice...very

flowers