Topic: daydreaming..
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Sat 07/25/09 12:50 PM
Edited by maleah on Sat 07/25/09 01:04 PM
Swaying in the hammock
thats tightly laced between the trees
drifting off into sweet daydreams
of the love thats shared between you and me

wrapped in your arms
the safest place ill ever know
gentle kisses on my forhead
just to let me know im not alone

sunkissed skin thats warm to the touch
feeling things for you, i have never felt
staring deep into your gentle eyes
i give in and begin to melt

the day has now turned to evening
and there is a chill thats setting in
but as i lay my head upon your chest
i realize the dream has yet to begin

for the truth of it all
is id rather live than to sleep
because when you find true love
reality is far better than your dreams



kc0003's photo
Sat 07/25/09 01:03 PM
".....rather live than sleep"

i like that line
and i love the write

love



johncarl's photo
Sat 07/25/09 01:07 PM
very good. and you are very good looking tolove love love

Gossipmpm's photo
Sat 07/25/09 01:07 PM
:heart:

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Sat 07/25/09 01:10 PM
thanksflowerforyou

IntelligentDesigner's photo
Sat 07/25/09 05:07 PM
Edited by IntelligentDesigner on Sat 07/25/09 05:07 PM
Well done :thumbsup:

s1owhand's photo
Sat 07/25/09 06:00 PM
flowerforyou

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Sat 07/25/09 06:03 PM
thanks:smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 07/25/09 06:12 PM
Very good! flowerforyou :smile:

Liked these lines...

for the truth of it all
is id rather live than to sleep
because when you find true love
reality is far better than your dreams

MzEm's photo
Sat 07/25/09 09:47 PM
Nice write...

wonderers515's photo
Sun 07/26/09 06:15 AM
when will the sun meet the moon?
when will the flow of river meet the sea?
when?
words are just sentences
the answer is on the tips of your finger.
reach out and touch.
simple thought simple smile is the key,
unlock it than you will see.
why waste precious time
when all you need is someone you lone to be.






wonderers

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Sun 07/26/09 06:36 AM

when will the sun meet the moon?
when will the flow of river meet the sea?
when?
words are just sentences
the answer is on the tips of your finger.
reach out and touch.
simple thought simple smile is the key,
unlock it than you will see.
why waste precious time
when all you need is someone you lone to be.






wonderers


thank you for thatflowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Sun 07/26/09 06:40 AM
Nice maleah... sweet write flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sun 07/26/09 06:52 AM
summer afternoon and sunshine blowing all around
through the laces under me
swirling against me almost touching
like the scent of fruit or forest

rocking gently in reverie
my love has met me here before all in imagination


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Sun 07/26/09 07:14 AM

Nice maleah... sweet write flowerforyou


thank youflowerforyou

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Sun 07/26/09 07:14 AM

summer afternoon and sunshine blowing all around
through the laces under me
swirling against me almost touching
like the scent of fruit or forest

rocking gently in reverie
my love has met me here before all in imagination




thanks--flowerforyou