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Edited by
maleah
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Sat 07/25/09 01:04 PM
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Swaying in the hammock
thats tightly laced between the trees drifting off into sweet daydreams of the love thats shared between you and me wrapped in your arms the safest place ill ever know gentle kisses on my forhead just to let me know im not alone sunkissed skin thats warm to the touch feeling things for you, i have never felt staring deep into your gentle eyes i give in and begin to melt the day has now turned to evening and there is a chill thats setting in but as i lay my head upon your chest i realize the dream has yet to begin for the truth of it all is id rather live than to sleep because when you find true love reality is far better than your dreams |
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".....rather live than sleep"
i like that line and i love the write |
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very good. and you are very good looking to
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thanks
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Edited by
IntelligentDesigner
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Sat 07/25/09 05:07 PM
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Well done
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thanks
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Very good!
Liked these lines... for the truth of it all is id rather live than to sleep because when you find true love reality is far better than your dreams |
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Nice write...
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when will the sun meet the moon?
when will the flow of river meet the sea? when? words are just sentences the answer is on the tips of your finger. reach out and touch. simple thought simple smile is the key, unlock it than you will see. why waste precious time when all you need is someone you lone to be. wonderers |
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when will the sun meet the moon? when will the flow of river meet the sea? when? words are just sentences the answer is on the tips of your finger. reach out and touch. simple thought simple smile is the key, unlock it than you will see. why waste precious time when all you need is someone you lone to be. wonderers thank you for that |
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Nice maleah... sweet write
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summer afternoon and sunshine blowing all around
through the laces under me swirling against me almost touching like the scent of fruit or forest rocking gently in reverie my love has met me here before all in imagination |
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Nice maleah... sweet write thank you |
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summer afternoon and sunshine blowing all around through the laces under me swirling against me almost touching like the scent of fruit or forest rocking gently in reverie my love has met me here before all in imagination thanks-- |
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