Dare I dream to dream the things, I used to when younger.

Dare I even share those thoughts, Storing them up no longer.


Dare I let loose my inner child, setting her free.

Dare I know what to do, Have I forgotton how to be.


Dare I utter the words upon my tongue.

Dare I try to voice them, or leave them unsung.


Dare I share the contents of my heart.

Dare I let feelings impart.


Dare I to believe in love once more.

Dare I feel anything, resisting what might be in store.


Dare I...




By: Teddy 07-23-2009

Pretty good poem, a few recommendations do with them what you will.

I think you misspelled 'upon' with an 'a' in the fifth line 'Dare I utter the words apon my tongue'. Also in the ninth line I don't think the 'to' is necessary in the line 'Dare I to believe in love once more', but it doesn't really matter either or I just think it rolls smoother without 'to'.

Deep none-the-less, if you don't dare you will never know.

Ott Oooooooo the spelling police!


(Joking) Thanks Fear I fixdidid it!

I dare ya...you go girl!

don't dare lady just do!!