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Rejection
Surrounded in this swirling mass Just busy, rushing dreams. Sometimes the music is confused, As doing and wanting seems, To intertwine and tangle, With reality sharing place, While in the vast, my little float, Surfaces to sink , no trace. An interlude of hope From just across the bluff. A wave, a flag's attention Now recognized, rebuff. Raine Les 7/22/2009 |
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Edited by
ddn122
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Wed 07/22/09 04:28 PM
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While in the vast, my little float,
Surfaces to sink , cool! 
I mean I can feel it in this line especially |
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don't you sink ok? we need you here...
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Rejection Surrounded in this swirling mass Just busy, rushing dreams. Sometimes the music is confused, As doing and wanting seems, To intertwine and tangle, With reality sharing place, While in the vast, my little float, Surfaces to sink , no trace. An interlude of hope From just across the bluff. A wave, a flag's attention Now recognized, rebuff. Raine Les 7/22/2009
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{{{{Sadie}}}}
 
No drowning while I'm on lifegaurd duty you hear! 
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