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Topic: So that i may live,breath and love....again
sugarjen Joined Tue 11/07/06 Posts: 2265	Mon 07/20/09 06:47 PM
Oh and now has come the time Yes the time.... To invade my mind To take the time To slowly unravel,unwind The pain i find Hidden deep inside When life gets hard And i hit the ground I fake a smile To hide my frown When in reality... Within my own tears I just may drown For oh so long I've done just that Turned my cheek, so to speak And shown my pain my back There comes a time I must unwind Unravel all the tightly coiled pain So that i may live again So that i may breath again So that i may love again

jerseygirlSINGLE Joined Wed 11/19/08 Posts: 3598	Mon 07/20/09 06:51 PM
very nice

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 07/20/09 06:52 PM
Oh and now has come the time Yes the time.... To invade my mind To take the time To slowly unravel,unwind The pain i find Hidden deep inside When life gets hard And i hit the ground I fake a smile To hide my frown When in reality... Within my own tears I just may drown For oh so long I've done just that Turned my cheek, so to speak And shown my pain my back There comes a time I must unwind Unravel all the tightly coiled pain So that i may live again So that i may breath again So that i may love again Great job...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 07/20/09 07:28 PM
Good one Jen Nice to see your smiling face back in here!

sugarjen Joined Tue 11/07/06 Posts: 2265	Mon 07/20/09 07:30 PM
Thanks for readin and your kind words

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 07/20/09 07:36 PM
sj

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/20/09 07:44 PM

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