Topic: pay attention...please
kalunda's photo
Sun 07/19/09 03:14 PM
yesterday...alone and troubled, clouds hid the sunlight from my view
today...alone yet comfortable, clouds parting, I see sky of blue.

is it odd that each day in this life, can be different from the rest
one day can be the worst of times...the next, the very best.

too often consumed with the journeys end...
the here and now I failed to tend.

seeking tomorrow, I lose today...
what wonders, have I let slip away.

did someone special take a second glance...
and I so intent, that I missed the chance.

to taste her lips...to touch her thigh...
to hear her whisper...to feel her sigh...

should I fail to hear what's said...
smack me up the side my head!slaphead


wannacuddlewthme's photo
Sun 07/19/09 03:16 PM
frustrated tears

Sharris's photo
Sun 07/19/09 04:27 PM

yesterday...alone and troubled, clouds hid the sunlight from my view
today...alone yet comfortable, clouds parting, I see sky of blue.

is it odd that each day in this life, can be different from the rest
one day can be the worst of times...the next, the very best.

too often consumed with the journeys end...
the here and now I failed to tend.

seeking tomorrow, I lose today...
what wonders, have I let slip away.

did someone special take a second glance...
and I so intent, that I missed the chance.

to taste her lips...to touch her thigh...
to hear her whisper...to feel her sigh...

should I fail to hear what's said...
smack me up the side my head!slaphead



do you mean SWAK up the side of the head? Muah!!

vivian2981's photo
Sun 07/19/09 04:30 PM

yesterday...alone and troubled, clouds hid the sunlight from my view
today...alone yet comfortable, clouds parting, I see sky of blue.

is it odd that each day in this life, can be different from the rest
one day can be the worst of times...the next, the very best.

too often consumed with the journeys end...
the here and now I failed to tend.

seeking tomorrow, I lose today...
what wonders, have I let slip away.

did someone special take a second glance...
and I so intent, that I missed the chance.

to taste her lips...to touch her thigh...
to hear her whisper...to feel her sigh...

should I fail to hear what's said...
smack me up the side my head!slaphead




Thank you...I liked this and enjoyed the ending also!

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Sun 07/19/09 04:42 PM
Fab write Kalunda...flowerforyou

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Sun 07/19/09 05:54 PM
like the turn the piece takes........teasingbrunette