Topic: sun
jimz's photo
Thu 07/16/09 01:34 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 07/16/09 01:35 PM
the sun of love
the plight of drowning
the plight of love
the plight of drowning
without a tree

the sun
of longing

how far
when i cant
crawl through

my hands
cant whip
the swinging
vines

my hands
cant move

my hands
cut off

the sun
of passion

my sore eyes
without eyes

seeing blue
seeing blue

yet feeling
sky

the sun
of love

again
and again

no rays
shine

one shadow
gone

and then
another

oh sun
where are

my eyes

tacotuesday's photo
Thu 07/16/09 01:44 PM
painful, yet intensely brilliant

jimz's photo
Thu 07/16/09 02:27 PM
ah what a great compliment, thank you

jimmy

tacotuesday's photo
Thu 07/16/09 02:29 PM

ah what a great compliment, thank you

jimmy
anytime. i love these sorts of short writes when intense

MzEm's photo
Thu 07/16/09 03:41 PM

the sun of love
the plight of drowning
the plight of love
the plight of drowning
without a tree

the sun
of longing

how far
when i cant
crawl through

my hands
cant whip
the swinging
vines

my hands
cant move

my hands
cut off

the sun
of passion

my sore eyes
without eyes

seeing blue
seeing blue

yet feeling
sky

the sun
of love

again
and again

no rays
shine

one shadow
gone

and then
another

oh sun
where are

my eyes

brokenheart flowerforyou

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 07/18/09 06:00 AM
I felt it jimz!
:cry:

no photo
Sat 07/18/09 06:02 AM
in awe of your visions as always Jimmysmokin flowerforyou