Topic: Thoughts
Gryphyn's photo
Sat 05/19/07 08:42 AM


A child’s words are on my mind,
To ring aloud would be so kind.
To hear these words, to think of bliss,
To think of life and that first kiss.

A kiss of love from one like you,
Can lead to life, of one as two.
Share these things, of love, of life,
Share these things, to be my wife.

Words are true from deep inside,
Emotions unlocked they cannot hide.
Hidden in, the setting sun,
Waiting long, for just the one.

One who holds the golden key,
Unlocks things inside of me.
Things unlocked within this breast,
More precious than, gold in a chest.

Golds of life, gold for miles,
Never brings, a gentle smile.
This smile to seek from deep within,
Family new, it will begin.

Life has meaning, its been foretold,
Love with children, more than gold.
Golden days will soon be here,
Someday soon the kids will hear.

Of a life, of the times,
Of a life without the rhymes.
Rhymes today unlike before,
Opens now those unlocked doors.

Doors of life, so gentle, so free,
Opened now, they welcome me.
To this life, a gentle kiss,
One today I will not miss.

These words I write, they ring today,
They ring my love to far away.
Away these thoughts, within my mind,
These thoughts of love can be so kind.

ToyotaGirl's photo
Sat 05/19/07 08:47 AM
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TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 05/19/07 08:59 AM
Awesome Gryphyn, it shall not be long before
you will have love of a child that is richer
than gold itself.bigsmile bigsmile flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Sat 05/19/07 09:06 AM
Awesome Gryphyn. Always a pleasure to read your words.

RainbowTrout's photo
Sat 05/19/07 09:09 AM
Really loved reading your poem.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sat 05/19/07 11:46 AM
Beautiful flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 05/19/07 01:36 PM
awww G ya RAWK!!bigsmile happy flowerforyou

bibby7's photo
Sat 05/19/07 01:39 PM
Gryphyn..This is an awesome work! Kudos!!bigsmile

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 05/19/07 02:13 PM
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What can I say...
Beautiful...
You never cease to bring a tear to my eye!
Not necessarily a bad thing!...Good, Very Good!

Thanks for touching my heeart once again!

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