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lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 07/15/09 11:59 AM
Why do I have to get cold To let the warmth fill my heart? What does it take For you to give the smallest things? How do I understand The total confusion This life has become? Where will I find What cannot be lost So deep within? When will I find love Through all the hatred Spread through this world? Who will be the one Apart from the many That will stay forever?

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 07/15/09 12:01 PM
Loved the ending "Who will be the one Apart from the many That will stay forever?" sending hugs your way

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 07/15/09 12:28 PM
Thanks for reading... I wasn't sure about the ending but I guess it was the right one.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 07/15/09 12:49 PM
Why does one ask questions? To discover the answers of course!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 07/15/09 01:06 PM
I'm not sure if these questions truly have answers that would make sense to any person living this life as we do. There may be answers but would we accept them as truth or shrug them off as something we didn't want to hear? Sucks when I do that huh?! Thanks Lady!!

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Wed 07/15/09 01:52 PM
Why do I have to get cold To let the warmth fill my heart? What does it take For you to give the smallest things? How do I understand The total confusion This life has become? Where will I find What cannot be lost So deep within? When will I find love Through all the hatred Spread through this world? Who will be the one Apart from the many That will stay forever? Look the other way for the opposite thing and right there is usually where you find it...but some things can't be undone, the shattered cup doesn't repair itself. Here's some love and glue from me! Nice poem! (sorry, there's no "glue" smiley)

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 07/15/09 02:03 PM
I'm not sure if these questions truly have answers that would make sense to any person living this life as we do. There may be answers but would we accept them as truth or shrug them off as something we didn't want to hear? Sucks when I do that huh?! Thanks Lady!! Nope, not at all. I have found truth at times can be very hard on my ears as well as my heart. Breathe through it and it can incorporate into an a-MAZ-ing well of understanding.

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 07/15/09 02:54 PM
Why do I have to get cold To let the warmth fill my heart? What does it take For you to give the smallest things? How do I understand The total confusion This life has become? Where will I find What cannot be lost So deep within? When will I find love Through all the hatred Spread through this world? Who will be the one Apart from the many That will stay forever? Look the other way for the opposite thing and right there is usually where you find it...but some things can't be undone, the shattered cup doesn't repair itself. Here's some love and glue from me! Nice poem! (sorry, there's no "glue" smiley) WOW!! Thanks Fusion!!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 07/15/09 02:56 PM
I'm not sure if these questions truly have answers that would make sense to any person living this life as we do. There may be answers but would we accept them as truth or shrug them off as something we didn't want to hear? Sucks when I do that huh?! Thanks Lady!! Nope, not at all. I have found truth at times can be very hard on my ears as well as my heart. Breathe through it and it can incorporate into an a-MAZ-ing well of understanding. Time for the mush..... I LOVES YOU BUNCHESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 07/15/09 03:08 PM
Oh if you must, dammit, back at'cha honeybunny!!!!!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 07/15/09 03:13 PM
Alright you... stop them tears ya know I don't do that often but when I mean it so much it just has to come out!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 07/15/09 03:30 PM
I know. Too bad we don't have--oo-wait, hmmm this'll have to do

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 07/16/09 06:10 PM
back at ya lady!!!

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Fri 07/17/09 07:49 PM
questions from deep within. What there are in the way of answers will come from the same place. Some answers you may already know, but not ready to accept or understand. That is how this life works... I hope you find all the answers which can be found

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 07/18/09 01:07 PM
Thanks (((David))) you know that some of these answers have been found but some of them are yet to come and I'm truly thankful for your support through it all

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 07/18/09 01:52 PM
Nice job The ending reminds me of one of Walt Whitman's poems ..."Among the Multitude."