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Topic: The Things I've Done
directandwrite's photo
Tue 07/14/09 09:58 PM
Edited by directandwrite on Tue 07/14/09 09:59 PM
ohwell The Things I've Doneohwell

I let you go,
I wasted tears.
I tried to calm
all of your fears.

I tried to love
while I felt hurt.
I gave you wine
while I took dirt.

I cried myself
to sleep at night,
and wondered if
you'd make things right.

I stood with you
because I care,
but when I needed
you weren't there.

I gave my heart
for you to break.
The more I gave
the more you'd take.

I showed you shelter
from the storm,
passed my coat
to keep you warm.

I hoped in time
that you would see,
the one you need
is only me.

I gave you hugs
and kisses too,
but she's the one
who's there with you.

You had the choice,
her or me.
You took the lover
and I got free.

I pushed it all
into my head,
while you brought her
into your bed.

I see it now,
all I missed then,
just how wrong
life could have been.

I thank you for
the way you ran.
As I've moved on
because I can.

ThomasJB's photo
Tue 07/14/09 10:03 PM
:cry: I feel your pain, I have been there. flowerforyou flowers

directandwrite's photo
Tue 07/14/09 10:09 PM

:cry: I feel your pain, I have been there. flowerforyou flowers


Thanks, Thomas, you're a real sweetheart! flowerforyou flowers

kc0003's photo
Tue 07/14/09 10:34 PM
brokenheart ...

directandwrite's photo
Tue 07/14/09 10:41 PM

brokenheart ...


It was a mistake of a situation that I am so thankful I am no longer in! Thanks for reading! :smile:

cas6285's photo
Tue 07/14/09 10:51 PM
brokenheart wow... Nice poem, I'm glad your not in that situation any more.

directandwrite's photo
Tue 07/14/09 10:58 PM

brokenheart wow... Nice poem, I'm glad your not in that situation any more.


Thanks Cas, I really appreciate the kind sentiment! flowerforyou

Kleisto's photo
Tue 07/14/09 11:03 PM
I'm so sorry direct, well at least now you know and can start to move forward right? (hugs) flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Tue 07/14/09 11:18 PM
Thanks, Kleisto I appreciate that! :smile:

Lilypetal's photo
Tue 07/14/09 11:26 PM
Every heart break brings us closer to realizing the kind of person we really need in our lives.

Lilypetal's photo
Tue 07/14/09 11:27 PM
Lovely write!!!

directandwrite's photo
Tue 07/14/09 11:27 PM

Every heart break brings us closer to realizing the kind of person we really need in our lives.


Thank you, Lily!!! flowerforyou flowers

no photo
Tue 07/14/09 11:46 PM
I thank you for
the way you ran.
As I've moved on
because I can.


Before long you will wonder why you stayed.

flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Tue 07/14/09 11:47 PM

I thank you for
the way you ran.
As I've moved on
because I can.


Before long you will wonder why you stayed.

flowerforyou



Thanks Hayley! You're right! flowerforyou flowers

nvkikigirl's photo
Wed 07/15/09 02:05 AM
i like this write!!!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

BL4766's photo
Wed 07/15/09 02:07 AM
AWESOME DAW!!!!
BEEN THERE...............I know that same exact feeling!!!!!flowerforyou flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Wed 07/15/09 02:08 AM

i like this write!!!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:


Thank you nvkikigirl! flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Wed 07/15/09 02:09 AM

AWESOME DAW!!!!
BEEN THERE...............I know that same exact feeling!!!!!flowerforyou flowerforyou




Beckie thank you....I hate that you can relate though! flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Wed 07/15/09 05:31 AM
Good write, and good move direct flowerforyou

tanyaann's photo
Wed 07/15/09 06:10 AM
Absolutely clear, to the point and beautiful! flowerforyou

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