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Edited by
directandwrite
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Tue 07/14/09 09:59 PM
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The Things I've Done
I let you go, I wasted tears. I tried to calm all of your fears. I tried to love while I felt hurt. I gave you wine while I took dirt. I cried myself to sleep at night, and wondered if you'd make things right. I stood with you because I care, but when I needed you weren't there. I gave my heart for you to break. The more I gave the more you'd take. I showed you shelter from the storm, passed my coat to keep you warm. I hoped in time that you would see, the one you need is only me. I gave you hugs and kisses too, but she's the one who's there with you. You had the choice, her or me. You took the lover and I got free. I pushed it all into my head, while you brought her into your bed. I see it now, all I missed then, just how wrong life could have been. I thank you for the way you ran. As I've moved on because I can. |
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I feel your pain, I have been there.
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I feel your pain, I have been there. Thanks, Thomas, you're a real sweetheart! |
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... It was a mistake of a situation that I am so thankful I am no longer in! Thanks for reading! |
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wow... Nice poem, I'm glad your not in that situation any more.
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wow... Nice poem, I'm glad your not in that situation any more. Thanks Cas, I really appreciate the kind sentiment! |
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I'm so sorry direct, well at least now you know and can start to move forward right? (hugs)
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Thanks, Kleisto I appreciate that!
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Every heart break brings us closer to realizing the kind of person we really need in our lives.
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Lovely write!!!
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Every heart break brings us closer to realizing the kind of person we really need in our lives. Thank you, Lily!!! |
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I thank you for
the way you ran. As I've moved on because I can. Before long you will wonder why you stayed. |
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I thank you for the way you ran. As I've moved on because I can. Before long you will wonder why you stayed. Thanks Hayley! You're right! |
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i like this write!!!
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AWESOME DAW!!!!
BEEN THERE...............I know that same exact feeling!!!!! |
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i like this write!!! Thank you nvkikigirl! |
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AWESOME DAW!!!! BEEN THERE...............I know that same exact feeling!!!!! Beckie thank you....I hate that you can relate though! |
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Good write, and good move direct
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Absolutely clear, to the point and beautiful!
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