Topic: when the pullie gives, uphill
d4tc's photo
Tue 07/14/09 08:30 AM


Tired of life
the hand it gave me
what i am doing with it
and all the saddens surrounding

Why do i harbor such sadness
i ask

only I know
the answer

every time I crash
I burn I fume
and learn

nothing

governing
my ideas
to happiness

a guess
well wished
of a penny
of bliss
amongst
this bottomless
myst

I fish
for life
like me

walking
on land

i tread

lightly

remember that time..

of course you wouldn't

be as lonely as me
if you did


I know most of my
happy moments
don't show it
but they are there


behind that confused
emotionless front
I don't show you
what moves what

I try my heartest (c)

if I move you mentally

it's because it's what
you give me

you keep me
further then arms bay

physically unordained

the boars head hangs

the whores
no shame

just I'm
too tame

mundane

in a world bodied
by other fish like
me

I only see me
holding hands

with me

wanting to be Hooked
on a happy known
home cooked life

no matter unplattered

even when it Gills me

LAMom's photo
Tue 07/14/09 01:49 PM
(J)
Upon the highest peek... we fall
and within the fall
we
Die a bit, shed our skin, laugh and scream as loud as we can
yet
Upon the highest peek...
We
See
Our Humility ... Our naked spirit
Its here
where we
Breathe :heart: flowers

ThomasJB's photo
Tue 07/14/09 02:39 PM
Hey I quite enjoyed this. Nice work. drinker

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 07/14/09 03:56 PM
flowerforyou

nvkikigirl's photo
Tue 07/14/09 08:06 PM
Edited by nvkikigirl on Tue 07/14/09 08:06 PM
i think this is one of your best pieces...:thumbsup: drinker

kc0003's photo
Tue 07/14/09 10:41 PM
nice piece... drinker

no photo
Wed 07/15/09 12:04 PM
moving and honestly felt-GREAT WRITE!!!!

jimz's photo
Thu 07/16/09 12:30 PM
cool

AngelLight's photo
Mon 07/20/09 07:17 PM
Excellent write Sweet J :heart:

Ditto on pkd..."moving and honestly felt"

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 07/20/09 07:24 PM
I like your wording of this...

Theres a school of <'}}}< right there with you. flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 07/20/09 10:53 PM
Made me feel (((J)))flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Tue 07/21/09 03:42 AM
:smile:

no photo
Tue 07/21/09 05:47 AM
Wonderful write,I really enjoyed.
Very heart felt.
smooched :heart: smooched drinker