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Tired of life the hand it gave me what i am doing with it and all the saddens surrounding Why do i harbor such sadness i ask only I know the answer every time I crash I burn I fume and learn nothing governing my ideas to happiness a guess well wished of a penny of bliss amongst this bottomless myst I fish for life like me walking on land i tread lightly remember that time.. of course you wouldn't be as lonely as me if you did I know most of my happy moments don't show it but they are there behind that confused emotionless front I don't show you what moves what I try my heartest (c) if I move you mentally it's because it's what you give me you keep me further then arms bay physically unordained the boars head hangs the whores no shame just I'm too tame mundane in a world bodied by other fish like me I only see me holding hands with me wanting to be Hooked on a happy known home cooked life no matter unplattered even when it Gills me |
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(J)
Upon the highest peek... we fall and within the fall we Die a bit, shed our skin, laugh and scream as loud as we can yet Upon the highest peek... We See Our Humility ... Our naked spirit Its here where we Breathe |
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Hey I quite enjoyed this. Nice work.
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Edited by
nvkikigirl
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Tue 07/14/09 08:06 PM
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i think this is one of your best pieces...
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nice piece...
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moving and honestly felt-GREAT WRITE!!!!
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cool
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Excellent write Sweet J
Ditto on pkd..."moving and honestly felt" |
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I like your wording of this...
Theres a school of <'}}}< right there with you. |
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Made me feel (((J)))
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Wonderful write,I really enjoyed.
Very heart felt. |
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