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directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 07/13/09 11:54 AM Edited by directandwrite on Mon 07/13/09 12:11 PM
Unsure Clinging to the hope that I will hear from you. Everything we have so unsure now. Longing for just a moment for you to tell me what has been and what has become of everything we are. Tears fall down my face if I get caught in the moment too much. Trying to tell myself all will make sense soon enough. I'm spending time talking to God and wondering if He can hear me through all of this. Alone in this solitude feeling; lacking patience, my greatest sin. Trapped in this unknowing place. Will I ever return from this again?

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 07/13/09 12:15 PM
Yes,,, you will rise from the Unsure I have come to enjoy your home Your Heart and Soul

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 07/13/09 12:15 PM
Yes,,, you will rise from the Unsure I have come to enjoy your home Your Heart and Soul Awww thank you LAMom!!!

lonetar25 Joined Mon 05/18/09 Posts: 3531	Mon 07/13/09 12:17 PM
he`s a damn fool i pity the fool

BL4766 Joined Sun 04/27/08 Posts: 74269	Mon 07/13/09 12:17 PM
Beautiful!!!!

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 07/13/09 12:18 PM
he`s a damn fool i pity the fool Thank you Lonetar!

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 07/13/09 12:19 PM
Beautiful!!!! Thank you Beckie! You're so sweet!!

ThomasJB Joined Sat 01/10/09 Posts: 4240	Mon 07/13/09 01:31 PM
Why do yo allow little boys to have that kind of effect on you? You are a better woman than those types deserve.

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Mon 07/13/09 02:23 PM
Unsure Clinging to the hope that I will hear from you. Everything we have so unsure now. Longing for just a moment for you to tell me what has been and what has become of everything we are. Tears fall down my face if I get caught in the moment too much. Trying to tell myself all will make sense soon enough. I'm spending time talking to God and wondering if He can hear me through all of this. Alone in this solitude feeling; lacking patience, my greatest sin. Trapped in this unknowing place. Will I ever return from this again? very nice writing.

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Mon 07/13/09 02:44 PM
Unsure Clinging to the hope that I will hear from you. Everything we have so unsure now. Longing for just a moment for you to tell me what has been and what has become of everything we are. Tears fall down my face if I get caught in the moment too much. Trying to tell myself all will make sense soon enough. I'm spending time talking to God and wondering if He can hear me through all of this. Alone in this solitude feeling; lacking patience, my greatest sin. Trapped in this unknowing place. Will I ever return from this again? Diggin' this write...keep your head up...

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 07/13/09 06:08 PM
Why do yo allow little boys to have that kind of effect on you? You are a better woman than those types deserve. Come here, Thomas!!! (((Thomas))) I won't allow them to hurt me!

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 07/13/09 06:09 PM
Unsure Clinging to the hope that I will hear from you. Everything we have so unsure now. Longing for just a moment for you to tell me what has been and what has become of everything we are. Tears fall down my face if I get caught in the moment too much. Trying to tell myself all will make sense soon enough. I'm spending time talking to God and wondering if He can hear me through all of this. Alone in this solitude feeling; lacking patience, my greatest sin. Trapped in this unknowing place. Will I ever return from this again? very nice writing. Thank you nvkikigirl!!!

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 07/13/09 06:11 PM
: Unsure Clinging to the hope that I will hear from you. Everything we have so unsure now. Longing for just a moment for you to tell me what has been and what has become of everything we are. Tears fall down my face if I get caught in the moment too much. Trying to tell myself all will make sense soon enough. I'm spending time talking to God and wondering if He can hear me through all of this. Alone in this solitude feeling; lacking patience, my greatest sin. Trapped in this unknowing place. Will I ever return from this again? Diggin' this write...keep your head up... Thanks a million MzEm! I really appreciate it!

Kleisto Joined Tue 05/13/08 Posts: 5704	Mon 07/13/09 08:30 PM
Great write direct, try and be strong. No matter what happens, God is still there. (hugs)

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 07/13/09 08:39 PM
Great write direct, try and be strong. No matter what happens, God is still there. (hugs) Thanks Kleisto, I really appreciate that! I know you are right!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/14/09 08:24 AM
The waiting or wondering can be difficult, yet clarity always comes. Listen to your heart....it will tell you exactly what you need, or what you need to do....and sometimes, surprisingly so, there is nothing to do...just letting something be as it is and it, "the answer," will reveal itself... effortlessly. Stay with yourself...all will be well.

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Tue 07/14/09 01:02 PM
Thank you, AngelLight!

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Tue 07/14/09 01:19 PM
Lacking patience isn't a sin...it just takes time to develop that facet of your "gem". You've been scratched,but honey, with a little timme and polish, you'll shine brighter than before!

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Tue 07/14/09 01:30 PM
Lacking patience isn't a sin...it just takes time to develop that facet of your "gem". You've been scratched,but honey, with a little timme and polish, you'll shine brighter than before! Awww thanks so much Fusion!