Topic: Eyes
FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:17 AM
"Look into my eyes son,"
"Tell me, what do you see?"

Hate, anger, revenge, and shame,
Refusal of responsibility, in your hands.
Left me to walk alone, among the damned,
Without thought you cast me into the dark.
In the blink of an eye, I no longer existed,
But before you I again stand upon my own feet.

You did not break me, or even teach me.
I adapted on my own, learned the mistakes by decision.

Without you, I overcame obstacles.
In the blink of an eye, and drop of a tear.
Before your voice escapes your lips.
I became a man far before yourself.

Wisdom, acceptance, compromise, and pride,
Accepting responsibility of the problems I caused.
Stood alone, stand alone, at least I'm not upon the ground,
Asking someone you should never have to for forgiveness.
In the blink of an eye, I no longer existed,
But before you I again stand upon my own feet.

"I forgive you father, for I hold no grudge,"
"I did fine on my own, moved on from my mistakes."

Without you, I still survived.
Never shedding a tear, now I have.
Before your eyes I forgave.
All alone, I became a man.

Ladylid2012's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:30 AM

From a mommy who raised 3 very fine young men alone...
that was an awesome write

flowers

darkowl1's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:47 AM
talk about coming of age! excellent write my friend!!!!drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker wow!

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:56 AM


From a mommy who raised 3 very fine young men alone...
that was an awesome write

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Thank you.flowers


talk about coming of age! excellent write my friend!!!!drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker drinker wow!


As always, thanks mate!drinker

s1owhand's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:59 AM
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directandwrite's photo
Sun 07/12/09 02:14 AM
That is awesome Fear!! flowerforyou flowerforyou I hope you are doing well lately!

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 07/12/09 04:11 AM

That is awesome Fear!! flowerforyou flowerforyou I hope you are doing well lately!


Thanks DaW!flowerforyou flowerforyou

I'm alive, still...about it, no real change here. How have you been?flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 07/12/09 09:41 AM
drinker nice heartfelt write my frienddrinker

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:24 PM

drinker nice heartfelt write my frienddrinker


Thanks!drinker drinker

directandwrite's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:26 PM


That is awesome Fear!! flowerforyou flowerforyou I hope you are doing well lately!


Thanks DaW!flowerforyou flowerforyou

I'm alive, still...about it, no real change here. How have you been?flowerforyou



I'm doing okay, I've had some bad days here and there recently...but I'm doing okay, thank you! :smile:

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:28 PM



That is awesome Fear!! flowerforyou flowerforyou I hope you are doing well lately!


Thanks DaW!flowerforyou flowerforyou

I'm alive, still...about it, no real change here. How have you been?flowerforyou



I'm doing okay, I've had some bad days here and there recently...but I'm doing okay, thank you! :smile:


Okay is good, hopefully your days start getting better.flowerforyou flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:35 PM
Thanks, Fear, I appreciate that!!! You too, man! flowerforyou :wink: :thumbsup:

crimsonphoenix's photo
Sun 07/12/09 01:36 PM
I am proud of you for sticking through. drinker

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 07/12/09 07:15 PM

I am proud of you for sticking through. drinker


Thanks!drinker