Topic: loves prison
tonysosa1's photo
Wed 07/08/09 10:30 AM
trapped in loves prison steel bars hold my soul. unwilling to cope never wanting to let me free. a sentence unforgiving intense feeling of happiness. yet filled with fear jeolousy hate and consiquence .the judge my lover taunting me .i pleed let me free but intangled we are both prisoners of love.

robert1652's photo
Wed 07/08/09 11:09 AM
Edited by robert1652 on Wed 07/08/09 11:09 AM

trapped in loves prison steel bars hold my soul. unwilling to cope never wanting to let me free. a sentence unforgiving intense feeling of happiness. yet filled with fear jeolousy hate and consiquence .the judge my lover taunting me .i pleed let me free but intangled we are both prisoners of love.


ok you are free


MzEm's photo
Wed 07/08/09 01:04 PM
flowerforyou good write.