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Vacant
Wondering what has happened, and why I feel this way... A bit betrayed, a bit forlorn, and not even sure why. I wish I could tell you how I feel! I wish I could let you know why! But I can't because you don't hear me. I can't because you don't care. My head uncertain about all things. Trusting and feeling alone. Wondering what tomorrow brings, but not really ever knowing... Where did I go wrong? What is it about me that's so unappealing? What did I ever do wrong to you? I can't be anything but me! I'm sorry if that isn't good enough; sometimes it's not even for me. But still I deserve something better than this I deserve to be loved... |
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Wow,describes how I feel.
Very heart felt write. |
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Wow,describes how I feel. Very heart felt write. Thanks 2KidsMom...that's how I'm feeling tonight.... |
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That hits home
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Edited by
2KidsMom
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Sat 07/04/09 10:00 PM
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Wow,describes how I feel. Very heart felt write. Thanks 2KidsMom...that's how I'm feeling tonight.... Well, you are not alone. I often wonder this same thing..and feel this way. |
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Very emotional write, you convey your emotions and write them in a way that anyone can relate to them. Hopefully all will be better for you DaW.
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Thank you all so much! I really appreciate your time and beautiful comments....it really means a lot to me!
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(((DAW)))
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Edited by
directandwrite
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Sat 07/04/09 11:03 PM
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Hey (((Patti))) Been another one of those evenings again...I'm about sick of them, I'll tell you that...
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excellent write!
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excellent write! Thank you, Nvkikigirl You are very sweet! |
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And here it is a day later and things feel no better....
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And here it is a day later and things feel no better.... |
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very nice DAW!!!
it reads exactly how I feel! |
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very nice DAW!!! it reads exactly how I feel! Thanks, Beckie!! I know exactly what you mean!!!! Thank you 2KidsMom you are so kind! |
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Tenderly felt write....and the last line is great
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Tenderly felt write....and the last line is great Thank you, AngelLight |
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Vacant Wondering what has happened, and why I feel this way... A bit betrayed, a bit forlorn, and not even sure why. I wish I could tell you how I feel! I wish I could let you know why! But I can't because you don't hear me. I can't because you don't care. My head uncertain about all things. Trusting and feeling alone. Wondering what tomorrow brings, but not really ever knowing... Where did I go wrong? What is it about me that's so unappealing? What did I ever do wrong to you? I can't be anything but me! I'm sorry if that isn't good enough; sometimes it's not even for me. But still I deserve something better than this I deserve to be loved... Oh my this is so good! I could dig every line....I can relate...wow. |
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Thank you MzEm, you are always so sweet!
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