Previous 1
Topic: Vacant
directandwrite's photo
Sat 07/04/09 09:44 PM
ohwellVacantohwell

Wondering what has happened,
and why I feel this way...

A bit betrayed, a bit forlorn,
and not even sure why.

I wish I could tell you how I feel!
I wish I could let you know why!

But I can't because you don't hear me.
I can't because you don't care.

My head uncertain about all things.
Trusting and feeling alone.

Wondering what tomorrow brings,
but not really ever knowing...

Where did I go wrong?
What is it about me that's so unappealing?

What did I ever do wrong to you?
I can't be anything but me!

I'm sorry if that isn't good enough;
sometimes it's not even for me.

But still I deserve something better than this
I deserve to be loved...


no photo
Sat 07/04/09 09:52 PM
Wow,describes how I feel.

Very heart felt write.flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Sat 07/04/09 09:57 PM

Wow,describes how I feel.

Very heart felt write.flowerforyou


Thanks 2KidsMom...that's how I'm feeling tonight....

beauty314's photo
Sat 07/04/09 09:57 PM
That hits homeflowerforyou

no photo
Sat 07/04/09 09:59 PM
Edited by 2KidsMom on Sat 07/04/09 10:00 PM


Wow,describes how I feel.

Very heart felt write.flowerforyou


Thanks 2KidsMom...that's how I'm feeling tonight....


Well, you are not alone.flowerforyouflowerforyou flowerforyou

I often wonder this same thing..and feel this way.

FearandLoathing's photo
Sat 07/04/09 10:00 PM
Very emotional write, you convey your emotions and write them in a way that anyone can relate to them. Hopefully all will be better for you DaW.flowerforyou flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Sat 07/04/09 10:02 PM
Thank you all so much! I really appreciate your time and beautiful comments....it really means a lot to me! flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Sat 07/04/09 10:22 PM
ohwell ohwell ohwell

plk1966's photo
Sat 07/04/09 10:24 PM
(((DAW)))flowers

directandwrite's photo
Sat 07/04/09 10:45 PM
Edited by directandwrite on Sat 07/04/09 11:03 PM
Hey (((Patti))) flowerforyou flowers Been another one of those evenings again...I'm about sick of them, I'll tell you that...grumble

nvkikigirl's photo
Sat 07/04/09 11:37 PM
excellent write! flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Sat 07/04/09 11:49 PM

excellent write! flowerforyou


Thank you, Nvkikigirl flowerforyou You are very sweet!

directandwrite's photo
Sun 07/05/09 02:34 PM
And here it is a day later and things feel no better.... frown grumble

no photo
Mon 07/06/09 09:09 AM

And here it is a day later and things feel no better.... frown grumble


flowerforyou flowers flowerforyou

BL4766's photo
Mon 07/06/09 09:12 AM
very nice DAW!!!
it reads exactly how I feel!ohwell

directandwrite's photo
Mon 07/06/09 11:07 AM

very nice DAW!!!
it reads exactly how I feel!ohwell



Thanks, Beckie!! I know exactly what you mean!!!! flowerforyou :heart:


Thank you 2KidsMom you are so kind! flowerforyou flowers

AngelLight's photo
Mon 07/06/09 11:38 AM
Tenderly felt write....and the last line is great flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Mon 07/06/09 11:42 AM

Tenderly felt write....and the last line is great flowerforyou


Thank you, AngelLight flowerforyou flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Mon 07/06/09 02:34 PM

ohwellVacantohwell

Wondering what has happened,
and why I feel this way...

A bit betrayed, a bit forlorn,
and not even sure why.

I wish I could tell you how I feel!
I wish I could let you know why!

But I can't because you don't hear me.
I can't because you don't care.

My head uncertain about all things.
Trusting and feeling alone.

Wondering what tomorrow brings,
but not really ever knowing...

Where did I go wrong?
What is it about me that's so unappealing?

What did I ever do wrong to you?
I can't be anything but me!

I'm sorry if that isn't good enough;
sometimes it's not even for me.

But still I deserve something better than this
I deserve to be loved...




Oh my this is so good! I could dig every line....I can relate...wow.

directandwrite's photo
Mon 07/06/09 04:10 PM
Thank you MzEm, you are always so sweet! flowerforyou flowers

Previous 1