Topic: the universe of a barfly
jimz's photo
Fri 07/03/09 06:14 PM
at the edge
of the bar
was my seat
a yellow drunk destiny
as i drank the piss
the songs blared
over the noise
of the people

how now
the brown cow

staggered
home

through
the downtown
streets

the lights
always
brighter

when
youre
wasted

the music
still
blaring

through
my head

i am
chain smoking

the five blocks
to my room

where i
have named
each of the roaches
that room with me

i make it
and plop down

on my
bed

clothes
and all

i barely
get my shoes off

the relentless
drunk sleep

now
will start

and tomorrow
will be

another
fuucked up

day

wannacuddlewthme's photo
Fri 07/03/09 06:17 PM
Damn time ta change ones selfdrinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks drinks

Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 07/03/09 06:18 PM
Really good write!

Hope its pure imagination?

adj4u's photo
Fri 07/03/09 06:19 PM
The Queen Of The Silver Dollar
Shel Silverstein

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She's the queen of the Silver Dollar, and she rules this smokey kingdom
And her sceptre is a wine glass and a bar-stool is her throne
And the jesters, they flock around her, and they fight to win her favours
And see which one will take the queen of the Silver Dollar home

She arrives in all her splendour every night at nine o'clock
And her chariot is a cross-town bus that stops right down the block
The ol' piano minstrel plays a song as she walks in
And the queen of the Silver Dollar, she's home again

She's the queen of the Silver Dollar, and she rules this smokey kingdom
And her sceptre is a wine glass and a bar-stool is her throne
And the jesters flock around her, and fight to win her favours
And see which one will take the queen of the Silver Dollar home

Her royal gown is a satin dress, that's stained and slightly torn
And her sparkling jewels are rhinestones, and her shoes are scuffed and worn
From the many roads she's travelled and the wonderous sights she's seen
And I watch her and I pray God save the queen

She's the queen of the Silver Dollar, and she rules this smokey kingdom
And her sceptre is a wine glass and a bar-stool is her throne
And the jesters flock around her, and fight to win her favours
And see which one will take the queen of the Silver Dollar home

The queen of the Silver Dollar is not as haughty as she seems
She was once an ordinary girl with ordinary dreams
But I found her and I won her, and I brought her to this world
Yes I'm the man who made a queen of a simple country girl

She's the queen of the Silver Dollar, and she rules this smokey kingdom
And her sceptre is a wine glass and a bar-stool is her throne
And the jesters flock around her, and fight to win her favours
And see which one will take the queen of the Silver Dollar home

She's the queen of the Silver Dollar, and she rules this smokey kingdom

no photo
Fri 07/03/09 06:56 PM

at the edge
of the bar
was my seat
a yellow drunk destiny
as i drank the piss
the songs blared
over the noise
of the people

how now
the brown cow

staggered
home

through
the downtown
streets

the lights
always
brighter

when
youre
wasted

the music
still
blaring

through
my head

i am
chain smoking

the five blocks
to my room

where i
have named
each of the roaches
that room with me

i make it
and plop down

on my
bed

clothes
and all

i barely
get my shoes off

the relentless
drunk sleep

now
will start

and tomorrow
will be

another
fuucked up

day


Fanbloodytastic....flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 07/04/09 07:04 PM

at the edge
of the bar
was my seat
a yellow drunk destiny
as i drank the piss
the songs blared
over the noise
of the people

how now
the brown cow

staggered
home

through
the downtown
streets

the lights
always
brighter

when
youre
wasted

the music
still
blaring

through
my head

i am
chain smoking

the five blocks
to my room

where i
have named
each of the roaches
that room with me

i make it
and plop down

on my
bed

clothes
and all

i barely
get my shoes off

the relentless
drunk sleep

now
will start

and tomorrow
will be

another
fuucked up

day


Shades of Kerouac and BarFly. I LOVE this Jim!!!:heart:

beauty314's photo
Sat 07/04/09 07:07 PM
Jimmyflowerforyou
that is awesome

jimz's photo
Sat 07/04/09 07:08 PM
Thank you, A.

peace