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am I captive to my own fears...
is there time beyond these years? if I truly give all that is me... will I become then what others see? if I share the hidden parts my hopes, dreams and desire... will someone then, share theirs with me, and rekindle the dieing fire. I'll take a step, 'cause if I don't, I'll stay right in this place... looking in the mirror, at that sad and lonely face. |
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.... ..nice |
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Nice Write
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Edited by
Sharris
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Fri 07/03/09 11:18 AM
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am I captive to my own fears... is there time beyond these years? if I truly give all that is me... will I become then what others see? if I share the hidden parts my hopes, dreams and desire... will someone then, share theirs with me, and rekindle the dieing fire. I'll take a step, 'cause if I don't, I'll stay right in this place... looking in the mirror, at that sad and lonely face. such a deep introspective and personal share, a brave man in this thread. |
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"is there time beyond these years?"
I believe so Ty for sharing. Good write. |
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Such passion my friend
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You are so talented I love your work...
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