Topic: captive...
kalunda's photo
Fri 07/03/09 10:29 AM
am I captive to my own fears...
is there time beyond these years?

if I truly give all that is me...
will I become then what others see?

if I share the hidden parts
my hopes, dreams and desire...

will someone then, share theirs with me,
and rekindle the dieing fire.

I'll take a step, 'cause if I don't,
I'll stay right in this place...

looking in the mirror,
at that sad and lonely face.



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Fri 07/03/09 10:36 AM



....smokin ..nice

wannacuddlewthme's photo
Fri 07/03/09 10:37 AM
Nice Writedrinker

Sharris's photo
Fri 07/03/09 11:17 AM
Edited by Sharris on Fri 07/03/09 11:18 AM

am I captive to my own fears...
is there time beyond these years?

if I truly give all that is me...
will I become then what others see?

if I share the hidden parts
my hopes, dreams and desire...

will someone then, share theirs with me,
and rekindle the dieing fire.

I'll take a step, 'cause if I don't,
I'll stay right in this place...

looking in the mirror,
at that sad and lonely face.





such a deep introspective and personal share,
a brave man in this thread.

no photo
Fri 07/03/09 05:47 PM
:smile: drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 07/11/09 09:34 PM
smile2 flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Sun 07/12/09 07:17 AM
"is there time beyond these years?"



I believe so :heart:

Ty for sharing. Good write.

no photo
Sun 07/12/09 09:27 AM
Such passion my friend drinker drinker

MzEm's photo
Sun 07/12/09 04:37 PM
You are so talented I love your work...