Topic: Add a Verse> collabaration< | |
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Hope to get a collaborated effort on this write..lyrics? hmmmm Ill start the first four lines..feel free to quote and add a next verse.
I am the saw That made you an amputee cutting through bone Less you than there use to be |
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I am the knife
once stuck in your back. What goes around, came, now I'm under attack. |
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I am the word
you spoke so carelessly now goes goes from person to person and causes a monsterity |
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I think I spelled that wrong, monstrosity ??
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kindred spirits we once were
but are no longer I will crush you I will disfigure you I will maime you until, you are, no longer roko |
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As you cut me with your words
as you cut me with your gestures I will become sharp sharper than a razerblade and I will cut through your soul. roko |
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kindred spirits we once were but are no longer I will crush you I will disfigure you I will maime you until, you are, no longer This could be the chorus!! |
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Excellent contributes!!
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Thanks for compliments man, use it, its yours.
Roko |
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Without a heart-a broken soul,
To live in doubt-my loves your toll, I tear you down-to maintain my hold, Your spirit crushed-your flesh is cold... (Its on the fly, mr nice guy) |
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"Disfigured" would be an interesting title.
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God made this man
a man only one make me ten! kill me nine! call me greedy save one life I read this earlier with no reply. I felt more inspired now. Great replies to all and thanks niceguy for motivating our dark sides. Good topic starter |
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God made this man a man only one make me ten! kill me nine! call me greedy save one life I read this earlier with no reply. I felt more inspired now. Great replies to all and thanks niceguy for motivating our dark sides. Good topic starter save one life" and let it be mine (couldn't resist) |
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I am the knife once stuck in your back. What goes around, came, now I'm under attack. I Like this line... I am the Knife scarred you f**king face ( ...or) carved you a funny face Stab you in the tounge So my metal you can taste (solo) ..lol |
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God made this man a man only one make me ten! kill me nine! call me greedy save one life I read this earlier with no reply. I felt more inspired now. Great replies to all and thanks niceguy for motivating our dark sides. Good topic starter Awesome lines from everyone! I am so inspired. BTW Good suggestion for the Title DKOW "dIsFiGuReD"...Love it.. Keep em comming! |
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Its all under the bridge
As a hold your head wiggln feet and brused knees water splashes, as i stab u Just to make sure that i can still feel.. |
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