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Lovespell878 Joined Tue 09/11/07 Posts: 20	Thu 06/18/09 08:32 PM
Ever curious how two people can go from hello's and being kind to a neverending desire of bodies intertwined? Ever wonder how love creeps it's way in, where your heart seems to soar, as the two of you become one and float across the floor. Nevrending love that is pure and shared in this way is best, Forever. Together. From this life to the next.

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Thu 06/18/09 08:32 PM


HockeyChick Joined Thu 10/23/08 Posts: 4194	Thu 06/18/09 08:56 PM
cool

Jimmy59 Joined Thu 11/13/08 Posts: 1139	Thu 06/18/09 08:58 PM
I like this

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Fri 06/19/09 04:33 PM


MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Fri 06/19/09 07:22 PM
Ever curious how two people can go from hello's and being kind to a neverending desire of bodies intertwined? Ever wonder how love creeps it's way in, where your heart seems to soar, as the two of you become one and float across the floor. Nevrending love that is pure and shared in this way is best, Forever. Together. From this life to the next.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 06/19/09 08:54 PM
"Forever. Together. From this life to the next." Lovely communication... Love does not die, from here to there, from there to here

Lovespell878 Joined Tue 09/11/07 Posts: 20	Wed 07/15/09 10:48 AM
Wow! Thanks you guys. I really didn't think it would get such great reviews.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 07/15/09 10:59 AM
nice

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