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I am wondering how my profile look if i can make it better let me know I can use your suggestions
thankyou, Matt |
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Read's ok. Check your puncuation and, word usage.
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beautiful background in your main pic! and yes, sentences that are at an end should have a . and what's a manny?? good luck to you!
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Replace this:
[I am wondering how my profile look if i can make it better let me know I can use your suggestions] Change to: I was wondering how my profile looks.Also what changes should I make to improve it's appearance.Please let me know.I can use your suggestions.Thank You! Matt U have an adequate amount of info.in regards to yourself however U may want to describe some expectations pertaining to the significant other whom U seek.Godspeed!Cy ![]() ![]() |
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