Topic: can you rate my profile
hearttheef's photo
Tue 06/16/09 06:45 PM
I am wondering how my profile look if i can make it better let me know I can use your suggestions

thankyou,
Matt

shoesmonkey's photo
Tue 06/16/09 06:48 PM
Read's ok. Check your puncuation and, word usage.

bastet126's photo
Tue 06/16/09 06:56 PM
beautiful background in your main pic! and yes, sentences that are at an end should have a . and what's a manny?? good luck to you!

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Tue 06/16/09 07:06 PM
Replace this:
[I am wondering how my profile look if i can make it better let me know I can use your suggestions]
Change to:
I was wondering how my profile looks.Also what changes should I make to improve it's appearance.Please let me know.I can use your suggestions.Thank You! Matt

U have an adequate amount of info.in regards to yourself however U may want to describe some expectations pertaining to the significant other whom U seek.Godspeed!Cy :smile: drinker