Topic: Believe
blueeyez40's photo
Fri 06/12/09 09:38 PM
I grew up in a dysfunctional home yet still I believe.
I've seen horrible things, endured abuse and still I believe.
With hope, faith, and prayers it's because I believe.
Marni B.

Down2earthdebbie's photo
Fri 06/12/09 09:47 PM
Ok what is it that you believe? slaphead

blueeyez40's photo
Fri 06/12/09 10:53 PM
That i'll obviously never make it as a poet. Ooops.

AngelLight's photo
Sat 06/13/09 08:27 AM
Nice write....what I get from it is that despite what you have been through, you believe there is "another way," "another way of being in the world," regardless of what you have previously been exposed to or known flowerforyou :thumbsup:


MzEm's photo
Sat 06/13/09 03:10 PM

I grew up in a dysfunctional home yet still I believe.
I've seen horrible things, endured abuse and still I believe.
With hope, faith, and prayers it's because I believe.
Marni B.


MHO---I get from this you believe that no matter what, He is always there and will hear you when you cry, that you survived for a reason and it will soon manifest itself. I believe you could be a great poet, look at what you did with so few words...Peace M