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Dawn
Three wishes granted Genie lamp With many more to come Unique we stand A promise kept More different now than some An arrow landed Cupid's kiss A feeling calm and known Your left, my right Directions made To where that wind was blown The purple hue Cascading light The sun sets in the west Yet rises here Morning light Forgetting all the rest This warmth inside Tiny glow To melt the midnight dew Then welcome rain Puddle splash My dancing there with you Fighting those shadows Darkness gone Slaying all the bad Letting it go Goodbye, past And loneliness once had |
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Dawn
Three wishes granted Genie lamp With many more to come Unique we stand A promise kept More different now than some An arrow landed Cupid's kiss A feeling calm and known Your left, my right Directions made To where that wind was blown The purple hue Cascading light The sun sets in the west Yet rises here Morning light Forgetting all the rest This warmth inside Tiny glow To melt the midnight dew Then welcome rain Puddle splash My dancing there with you Fighting those shadows Darkness gone Slaying all the bad Letting it go Goodbye, past And loneliness once had
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Thank you Mirror!
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Dawn
Three wishes granted Genie lamp With many more to come Unique we stand A promise kept More different now than some An arrow landed Cupid's kiss A feeling calm and known Your left, my right Directions made To where that wind was blown The purple hue Cascading light The sun sets in the west Yet rises here Morning light Forgetting all the rest This warmth inside Tiny glow To melt the midnight dew Then welcome rain Puddle splash My dancing there with you Fighting those shadows Darkness gone Slaying all the bad Letting it go Goodbye, past And loneliness once had a beautiful minuet |
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a beautiful minuet Thank you and God Bless, Sweetie! I hope you are doing well!
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Wow! Wonderful Write! (hey that was 3w's )
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Thank you Tanya and Gossip!
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very NICE DAW!
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very NICE DAW!
Thank you, Beckie!!
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Not only do I love this, but can total relate to it as well. Great flow wonderful wording, seems to describe the story wonderfully.
This is a wonderful write DAW keep them coming
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Not only do I love this, but can total relate to it as well. Great flow wonderful wording, seems to describe the story wonderfully. This is a wonderful write DAW keep them coming
Thank you, Chris. I sooooo will...I have been quite inspired lately!
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the pleasure was all mine I assure you
I can't wait to read the next one Not only do I love this, but can total relate to it as well. Great flow wonderful wording, seems to describe the story wonderfully. This is a wonderful write DAW keep them coming
Thank you, Chris. I sooooo will...I have been quite inspired lately!
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Beautifully Written (((DAW)))
. Keep them coming, I love poetry just can't write it myself! I love reading all others! You did wonderful!
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Beautifully Written (((DAW))) . Keep them coming, I love poetry just can't write it myself! I love reading all others! You did wonderful!
Bless your heart, Linda thank you so much!!
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the pleasure was all mine I assure you
I can't wait to read the next one
Thank you! Hee hee
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Thank you Mz.Em!
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I LOVE this one Sweetie...PERFECTION!
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I LOVE this one Sweetie...PERFECTION!
Kim, you are too kind! Thank you!!
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Dawn
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