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Imbroglio
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Wed 06/03/09 05:07 PM
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the beginning is where this little story i choose to begin
for it would be rather silly to start from the end to the person this is directed this is more not a story but that of a feeling and though you can't see me this moment i hope that your ears they are ringing now i will admit that my rhyming is not as fair as some of my projection i shall go ahead and risk a few frowns or tears or even a little rejection now many of days i sat in this chair not one of happiness not one of despair i hand over so many a tale of shadows or of the mist i post them among these threads please read them i insist the shadows do this and the darkness does that but you have convinced my inner workings see that is not where my hearts at you have become a lighthouse for me and all of my thoughts who would have known that this place would have brought two individual minds together so quickly though this is much easier to write than speak it directly what has begun as a vague interest in some little rambled writings has developed into two wonderful people now sitting there smiling so now I think with no shadows to speak of what should i write about now how light can conjure love i won't be so rash to jump to any illusions or decisions though that is where i am leaning but i thank you my lighthouse for giving me a new beginning Imbro |
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I really liked this.Wonderful Write.
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ty 2kids you are always so kind I really liked this.Wonderful Write.
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To your lighthouse
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This one is really Wonderful! You did a really good job on this Beautiful poem! ((Chris))
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ty Kim
To your lighthouse
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ty Linda rhyming is not my strong point at all lolThis one is really Wonderful! You did a really good job on this Beautiful poem! ((Chris))
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ty Linda rhyming is not my strong point at all lolThis one is really Wonderful! You did a really good job on this Beautiful poem! ((Chris))
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I rarely even attempt to rhyme lol I know better lol
ty Linda rhyming is not my strong point at all lolThis one is really Wonderful! You did a really good job on this Beautiful poem! ((Chris))
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nice!!!
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ty Beckienice!!!
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WOW!!! This lighthouse you speak of? She is a very very very lucky girl! Beautiful poem, Chris!
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absolutely a delight to read! Thank you for letting us share in your wonder & joy
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ty DAW its a great feeling being guided hand in hand with such a great person leading the way WOW!!! This lighthouse you speak of? She is a very very very lucky girl! Beautiful poem, Chris!
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ty my friend i'm glad you enjoyed it absolutely a delight to read! Thank you for letting us share in your wonder & joy
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ty DAW its a great feeling being guided hand in hand with such a great person leading the way WOW!!! This lighthouse you speak of? She is a very very very lucky girl! Beautiful poem, Chris!
I can assure you that I understand the feeling Chris, yes, it very much does!
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ty 2kids you are always so kind