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Leviathan Fog
It ignores man's hand, rolling over, through, under. Unheeding victor. © LCA 26 May 2009 |
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burning skewer shines
piercing thick clouds many times crown of god and man |
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Leviathan Fog It ignores man's hand, rolling over, through, under. Unheeding victor. © LCA 26 May 2009 very nice |
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burning skewer shines piercing thick clouds many times crown of god and man nice add s1ow |
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Edited by
s1owhand
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Sat 05/30/09 06:58 AM
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good morning, Pam
i liked it Madam! |
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Nice MadameGeek!
OK, first haiku attempt... ~ BEHOLD ~ touched by hands of time a beauty shines through his eyes naked, clear, behold. ~© JDS 05/30/2009~ |
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