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It was such a lovely sound she sang as the morning sun showered vivacity over our bodies.
Providing the warmth missed from twilight until this waking dawn. Our lips met with summer’s passionate sweat. We lay side by side knowing not the next move to spawn. The breathe we take escapes our chests; we ponder if they’d be heard with their seductive tones? I sense her destiny is with someone else, but it’s me that would never leave her to be alone. Cheated 1 time too many out of what was supposed to be a sure victory. She weaved a web of charm and beauty casting a spell wrapped in mystery. This vacant feeling in my heart has me in search of an eternal tenant. I placate the gods of love in hopes that her presence in my soul is infinite. I can tame the feral side of my lustful wiles, though urges growing within won’t calm for very long. It’s drowning my ardor the advances she denies me, without the signs my heart still beats so strong. I canvas our time apart as the exposé of novel pain supplies the artful elegance with Broadway flair. Not with any unique resolve juxtapose, we transferred positive energy unlike any 2 forces can compare. Alone I’ve funneled listlessly through this existence with bogus grandiosity as my internal chaperone. Only now is this reality haunting me that I may live the time I’ve left all on my own. Place my charred remnants inside the bottle of barren hopes never sought for rescue. My chakra in shock as well planned this plot she performed flawlessly was no miscue. Just as dreams of the lonely bring streams of tears that quench Solitudes thirst. It’s the best that I can recall ever being treated by a woman, but also the very worst. |
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I allways enjoy your writtings (((Brwnkimba)))
You have such a flare for writting, a mighty flare! |
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Blessings MsTeddyBear2u and thank you so much. You have a wonderful weekend.
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This is a powerful write,,,,
captivating,,,,,your insight/self expression |
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Very appreciative of your extremely kind words Diamond4ever and I am thankful for the time taken to read this poem!
Take Care |
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That was a waaay goood write!!
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That's WAAAAYYYY COOOOOOlLLLL of you to say Gossipmpm.
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Such longing, regret and passion expressed. Hope springs eternal. Wishing the best for you always.
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Hi Princess, thank you and everything you said is exactly what I feel but all at 1 time. Life is so confusing.
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I see a man
Strong Fit Takes care of himself Taking care of himself in a way that others can only benefit from A man that most men would despise if it was not their own whom man being in that shape A man deserving Deserving all that he strives to become for goodness sakes |
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Beautiful!
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Very good write...
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Thank you d4tc, Lilypetal and MzEm,
for making me smile this morning I am in your debt. Smiles are never guaranteed during the day and you all started my morning off the right way. |
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Such a Nice Write.
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*sighs* Oh sweets, your writing is so elegant and heartfelt! *big hugs*
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Hello You,,,
Your canvas so vivid,,, blessings to you Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
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Thank you 2KidsMom for sharing your time with me.
tanyaann you know just what to say to me, big huggs back as we embrace and lose track of time. LAMom the way you feel my writing ooooh my. I wish I could here you recite some of your poetry. |
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tanyaann you know just what to say to me, big huggs back as we embrace and lose track of time. Time would only be an abstract in our minds. There would be no ticking of clocks. Only the flow of breath would mark the time. |
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It was such a lovely sound she sang as the morning sun showered vivacity over our bodies. Providing the warmth missed from twilight until this waking dawn. Our lips met with summer’s passionate sweat. We lay side by side knowing not the next move to spawn. The breathe we take escapes our chests; we ponder if they’d be heard with their seductive tones? I sense her destiny is with someone else, but it’s me that would never leave her to be alone. Cheated 1 time too many out of what was supposed to be a sure victory. She weaved a web of charm and beauty casting a spell wrapped in mystery. This vacant feeling in my heart has me in search of an eternal tenant. I placate the gods of love in hopes that her presence in my soul is infinite. I can tame the feral side of my lustful wiles, though urges growing within won’t calm for very long. It’s drowning my ardor the advances she denies me, without the signs my heart still beats so strong. I canvas our time apart as the exposé of novel pain supplies the artful elegance with Broadway flair. Not with any unique resolve juxtapose, we transferred positive energy unlike any 2 forces can compare. Alone I’ve funneled listlessly through this existence with bogus grandiosity as my internal chaperone. Only now is this reality haunting me that I may live the time I’ve left all on my own. Place my charred remnants inside the bottle of barren hopes never sought for rescue. My chakra in shock as well planned this plot she performed flawlessly was no miscue. Just as dreams of the lonely bring streams of tears that quench Solitudes thirst. It’s the best that I can recall ever being treated by a woman, but also the very worst. |
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"Sittin' on the dock of the bay
Wonderin' what you may have sent her way? Watchin' the thirst roll in bottled contentment rolls away again" The worst is the best; maybe we're all a lil more bipolar than we realize. Haunting write. |
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