Topic: Blood Red Sky
klaudia4000's photo
Fri 05/29/09 08:43 AM
Dawning summers fiery sky, wishing to watch the stars pass by. Fade to red this tapestry's glow, these loving eyes they overflow. Cooler breeze it passes by, the warmth fades but for a time. These city streets so calm and still, silents falls but even still these restless eyes peer outside looking at the blood red sky.

nvkikigirl's photo
Fri 05/29/09 07:41 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: waving

Michael1427's photo
Fri 05/29/09 08:24 PM

Dawning summers fiery sky, wishing to watch the stars pass by. Fade to red this tapestry's glow, these loving eyes they overflow. Cooler breeze it passes by, the warmth fades but for a time. These city streets so calm and still, silents falls but even still these restless eyes peer outside looking at the blood red sky.


This is very good but it felt like an introduction, like you stopped when you were just hitting your stride, or maybe I just wasn't ready for it to end. I have gazed out that window smile2