Sure it did

Her PC broke

all she said

complaining

explainging

to me how

she plays

with her

pc and

how hot

it

is

because

she just

touched it

and how she

thinks it

is broke

only I

know it

is not

because

she has

kids to

prove it

someone

screwed it

and she

says her

pc is broke

and wants

me to take

a look at

it only i

don't fix

what takes

8 years of

college

not

with

this

kind of

knowledge

I don't

have the

patience

to sit in

on a class

summoned

on someone

elses wit

accomadating

what I have

I will not

sit still

havent before

why start

now when

She was

screwed

she tied

her tubes

insists on

my glue

for her pc

that is hard

to believe

propped tween

her and

her laptop

I sit unstill

fiddling with

her pc until

it spills

data

Great play on words D

Somehow I knew you could fix that pc Sweet J


You had the knowledge

The advantages of being p.c. savvy hey?

This is a great piece...

Dc, generally I myself prefer this style of words pouring down a page like a waterfall, but in this case, I dont think that works as well for this piece. It's too broken and I think it is losing some of the impact. Have you tried structuring this in longer sentences and stanzas? Outside of that, the concept is way cool. And you know I love your work~

Dc, generally I myself prefer this style of words pouring down a page like a waterfall, but in this case, I dont think that works as well for this piece. It's too broken and I think it is losing some of the impact. Have you tried structuring this in longer sentences and stanzas? Outside of that, the concept is way cool. And you know I love your work~

very creative