*****

..the are songs that are written..
where someone lost a love..
whether it would be by circumstances..
..or the lord above...

but it would be a lie..
..just to sit and cry..
and sing here ,one of those songs..
cause if the truth,be what you know it..
..damn ..i'm glad your gone...
.....*****...



SAND DUNES


..i watched a boy
grow into a man
walking across the stage
against the rage and rhyme
i watched the sands
of time
drift away...
..today...
and with a smile
i saw the miles
we had been
and i would do it
again
a thousand times
a thousand lines ..
write the songs
of our
lives..
in
sand dunes...






writings from the tombs..

Very nice write tom

"and with a smile
i saw the miles
we had been
and i would do it
again
a thousand times
a thousand lines ..
write the songs
of our
lives.."

Eloquent.....

"write the songs
of our
lives..
in
sand dunes... "

That is an exquisite image - placing such immense value on experience that it matters more that it existed than that it was marked in history.

Impressively honed.

...thank you all..