Topic: ~Opened Eyes~ | |
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Without any meaning, the days flow by.
Without any reason, I give a sigh. Now then, there is one that brings light to my world. Over a great barrier, It seems I was then hurled. Within the dark corner, I have been throughout the year. But she has shown me the light that i now need not fear. As I gaze upon my savior, my heart sighs of pain. The beauty of she, drives my mind insane. Eyes as pure as a cloudless sky. My heart beats ever faster as she passes by. Feelings deep inside myself, feelings unknown. As my attention pulls towards her, and her alone. What's different about today, I do not know, But away from her, I will not go. Forever by her side, I wish to stay. And yet, I will eternally rejoice if it is just for today. ____________________________________~Vincent Night~_ It might be just me but this one felt like it didnt have as much depth as my others. but still tnx for reading and pleas tell me what u think ~♥~ |
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I think this is beautiful. Nicely done!!
My fave is the ending. "Forever by her side, I wish to stay. And yet, I will eternally rejoice if it is just for today." To have that one moment....beautiful!!! |
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Very good!
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