Topic: no title yet | |
---|---|
Edited by
Imbroglio
on
Wed 05/20/09 02:52 AM
|
|
Sorry I was bored
whispers gather within the serenity of darkness speaking of a reflective past speaking of a lone soldier tales can be heard of battles fought, bravely, along side of shadows only to be impaled by the rays of the mighty sun freedom temporarily conjured banshees now call my name though sanctity can be found among the pillars they too begin to crumble under the weight of time itself i dare not venture into the light alone and cast shadows upon love once again a stronger force is needed a call for aid shouted silence |
|
|
|
A Long Walk Home........ By Imbroglio
|
|
|
|
Hey thats a good idea
Pata A Long Walk Home........ By Imbroglio |
|
|
|
Yuh...... I liked it......
|
|
|
|
I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend
Yuh...... I liked it...... |
|
|
|
Good read my friend. Always enjoy reading your words. So no need to be sorry, just write more.
|
|
|
|
Ty We'll see if anything else comes to mind lol
Good read my friend. Always enjoy reading your words. So no need to be sorry, just write more. |
|
|
|
Nice!!!
|
|
|
|
Ty
Nice!!! |
|
|
|
I enjoyed this- look forward to seeing more
|
|
|
|
Edited by
Imbroglio
on
Wed 05/20/09 04:09 AM
|
|
Ty
I don't really post much in here any more I tend to hide most of my writing in my profile. ty once again I enjoyed this- look forward to seeing more |
|
|
|
love it! powerful
and you KNOW that I have always been a huge fan of your writings.. and encourage you to keep sharing with us |
|
|
|
ty my friend I'm glad you enjoyed it
love it! powerful and you KNOW that I have always been a huge fan of your writings.. and encourage you to keep sharing with us |
|
|
|
Welcome home Stranger
|
|
|
|
mmmm, I thought I saw you zip in a post sum'mere recently. I do like Pata's title too. It fits the "P.O.W." feel to this one, but it's not war that imprisons this poetic subject..........
Good to read your writings again! |
|
|
|
Hi mom
Welcome home Stranger |
|
|
|
Edited by
Imbroglio
on
Wed 05/20/09 09:43 AM
|
|
|
|
|
|
Edited by
Imbroglio
on
Wed 05/20/09 09:43 AM
|
|
tyand you are most certainly correct about the imprisonment you know me always zippin or zaggin lol mmmm, I thought I saw you zip in a post sum'mere recently. I do like Pata's title too. It fits the "P.O.W." feel to this one, but it's not war that imprisons this poetic subject.......... Good to read your writings again! |
|
|
|
Within the serenity of darkness and light it seems balance is often found. Another really good write Imbro
|
|
|
|
ty
wow where'd you find this one I thought it shot off the page for sure Within the serenity of darkness and light it seems balance is often found. Another really good write Imbro |
|
|