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Spiraling down a forgotten path
Shadows whirl in the corners I don’t want to dream it, feel it Find an excuse to turn back Words drift softly to my ears They’re like a thousand screams None I wish to hear, to feel Shelter myself in silence |
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Wonderful write...
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You are very gifted.
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Thank you MzEm!!
Gingin, so kind of you to say. Thank you for reading my work. |
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Lily, your write is simplistically brilliant!
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Silence is golden at times
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Lily, your write is simplistically brilliant! AngelLight, so glad you enjoyed it...such a huge compliment coming from you. |
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Silence is golden at times Yes it is, LAMom |
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Fantastic poem.
~ the message, the nuance, the solution for shelter |
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Thank you Diamond!
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Nice piece
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I like that poem.
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