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Topic: Lost in you
Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Mon 05/18/09 05:30 PM
I get lost In you In your softness As you suround me In your Love In your whispers In my ear Of love Undying In your lips On mine Like Melting Chocolate As your hands carress My body I feel the longing In Your Fingers To taste Me As I Want To Taste You Tammy. 5/09

screaMNchic Joined Sun 11/04/07 Posts: 479	Mon 05/18/09 05:32 PM
awesome... good job

wannacuddlewthme Joined Tue 11/11/08 Posts: 7110	Mon 05/18/09 05:36 PM
Wow

ItMightBeMe2 Joined Mon 05/18/09 Posts: 77	Mon 05/18/09 06:26 PM


Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/19/09 03:54 AM
Thank you I hope I cause one sit and think!

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Tue 05/19/09 10:26 AM
"melting chocolate" Awesome!!!

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/19/09 11:21 AM
Thanks

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Tue 05/19/09 11:23 AM
I get lost In you In your softness As you suround me In your Love In your whispers In my ear Of love Undying In your lips On mine Like Melting Chocolate As your hands carress My body I feel the longing In Your Fingers To taste Me As I Want To Taste You Tammy. 5/09 "Like melting chocolate" talk about yummy kisses...mmmmm Good write..

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/19/09 05:45 PM
To you fellow poet

TJokerzWild Joined Tue 05/08/07 Posts: 880	Tue 05/19/09 06:01 PM
Very Nice

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 05/19/09 06:01 PM
Fantastic!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 05/20/09 12:13 AM
You are smokin' baby lol

Jimmy59 Joined Thu 11/13/08 Posts: 1139	Wed 05/20/09 12:57 AM
I like

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Wed 05/20/09 03:33 AM
Thank you

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