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Topic: Broken
nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Mon 05/18/09 01:21 AM
Pounding waves entice whisper mesmerize in and out constant in their vulgar and loud speech eyes blink salty and sweet dripping droplets onto the beach watering the forgotten seashells Copyright Kim P. 05/17/09

nolaking Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 270	Mon 05/18/09 01:24 AM
love the copyright,,,, cute

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Mon 05/18/09 01:26 AM
love the copyright,,,, cute

Ragnorak Joined Sat 05/16/09 Posts: 36	Mon 05/18/09 06:40 AM
and through the eternity of time i sit inside a seashell of the forgotten time good piece

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Mon 05/18/09 10:00 AM
and through the eternity of time i sit inside a seashell of the forgotten time good piece Great line!!! Thank you!

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Tue 05/19/09 01:23 AM
good going with the copy right, lol

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 05/19/09 08:24 AM


nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Tue 05/19/09 10:02 AM Edited by nvkikigirl on Tue 05/19/09 10:11 AM
calm: i'm silly and people get a kick out of my copyright. © LOL LA: thank you!!!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 05/19/09 10:13 AM
Nice imagery

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Tue 05/19/09 10:20 AM
Thank you kc!!

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