Topic: Overnight Tourist
brwnkimba's photo
Thu 05/14/09 04:38 PM
Deep into my next life the pages turn backwards not forward.
Relief gained is soon lost amid once lush meadows as the brute within feels cornered.

Grant this burden the fiercest battle, well as an epic reckoning on this tormented soul.
Dealt the final lash across my sun worn back were the wounds will never heal or grow old.

Now it’s the creature man fears more than himself that emerges from the rusty but sturdy chains.
Drenched in jealousy and writhing about ferociously in an uncontrolled mad rage.

On the eve of their wedding this animal is far from at ease or peace.
I’m marred for any other to love by a curse transforming me into this vindictive beast.

Savage, as all thought is suddenly consumed by the necessity to forage with a lack of reasoning.
I roam aimlessly thronged by those hypocrites who’d see my loss as somewhat pleasing.

It’s just so unfair how most are born with a life of undetermined destiny.
The only path I’ve been directed to explore leads me on a course were my faith is always testing me.

There’s an inert feral hunter in all waiting to be released from the shackles that constrict us.
Threats are only words until the action becomes physical making them relevant and ubiquitous.

There’s calming that can ensue if conflict is avoided and resolution given a fertile grove to flourish.
Until the next time you allow a boarder in your bed as a mere overnight tourist.

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Thu 05/14/09 04:40 PM
WOW {{{BK}}}...REALLY enjoyed this....you never cease to amaze us.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Thu 05/14/09 04:50 PM
MisKim323,

You are so kind my friend,
Thank you so much and have a peaceful eveningflowerforyou

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Fri 05/15/09 07:01 AM

MisKim323,

You are so kind my friend,
Thank you so much and have a peaceful eveningflowerforyou
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Fri 05/15/09 08:21 AM
Very good write..:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Fri 05/15/09 11:24 AM
simply amazing:smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Fri 05/15/09 11:30 AM
Namaste brwn flowerforyou :heart:

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Fri 05/15/09 05:04 PM
Thank you MzEm,I'm glad that you enjoyed, pkd1220 I really think that you are amazing and there's nothing simple about it.
And peace be with you as always AngelLight.
I really appreciate my Mingle2 family here.
It's such a Blessing to have this forum to express myself and have a lot of people that I respect let me know what they truly feel.

One Love:heart: