Topic: Crushing Bambi | |
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Why did I come here,
I think I was bored, Thought it could be fun, Maybe a little lonely, Needed someone to talk to, Over the age of six, You were unexpected, What do I do now, Why do you talk to me, Are you sure you meant me, Not the guy in the picture, Above me, or below me, My first thought was wow, And she is talking to me, No way, this isn't happening, Cool, Nervous as hell, I really dont know why, We talked, and laughed, Played a game or two, Shooting pool, Scribbling silly pictures, Listening to music, Camming with my kids, You are a pretty face, But so much more, The mind behind the eyes, Is more than I ever dreamed, I smile at your picture, When telling my friends, The incredible person, I met the other day, Your voice gives me chills, Your laugh gives me thrills, Your smile lights my days, In so many ways, I look for you in the mornings, I look for you at night, I am somewhat dissapointed, When you're out of sight, You make me laugh, You make me think, You gave me a nickname, That implies I stink, When did this poem, Begin to rhyme, I don't do that, Well not all the time, Usually somber, Sometimes morose, My poetry appeals, To teenage Emo's, You have me confused, A little bit mixed up, I think I really like it, You make me wake up, I tell you my secrets, And embarassing tales, You never mock me, Or take the wind from my sails, You make me believe, In myself most of all, You are my friend, On you I can call, I show you my babies, The new ones and old, When froggie was born, You're the first one I told, I've gone on too long, The rhymings too much, I usually dont do it, Rambling and such, I wish we were closer, But we are as close as we can be, Until I can change that, I'll be crushing Bambi.... |
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Very nice
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you are being kind Meg, love your name by the way my daughters name is Megan. Somehow in the middle my train was derailed and in the crash I bumped my head and started rhyming, generally i dont write rhyming poetry. But I thank you anyway :)
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(((Flower)))
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This is ---------- sweet, amusing, touching, and EGAD - it does rhyme! Most enjoyable and thank you for allowing us in as you discover there is more to you than you thought.
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when taken by someone there's no accounting for what happens in our minds- are the surprises nice?
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I am digging this!
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Just can't stop reading it and it makes me smile every time
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Enjoyed this very much.. read it a couple times.. I feel we may have all been there with those thoughts.. here or elsewhere.. beautiful job!
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I like this. It's personal and a great way to show her how you feel and care!
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