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| Topic: My First Poem as a Newbie Here - Called: Hope Presents | |
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Hope Presents
A shimmering existence in the distance Hope is on the horizon. It reveals itself in many forms, many shapes, It’s up to you what to take, What to grasp hold of never letting go. Vulnerability is “alright” to show. It could be as simple as: lending a hand to a friend Or complicated like trying to mend… A broken heart or relationship. Try taking a mind trip from here to beyond… That shimmering existence in the distance. |
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Very very nice.
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Great peom, and welcome I hope we see more from you.
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To:
MzEm: Thanks so very much for reading my poem & your feedback. A friend who recommended me to this site said I should most definitely post my poems. I am sooo happy that there is a place to do that here.
Abracadabra: Thank you for reading my poem & commenting on it. That means alot being new & all 
MisKim323: Thanks for your cute flower emoticon
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Welcome to our home,,
Beautiful write
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nicely done...welcome to the fun house...
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Nice work!
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Good job! Very nice, and welcome!
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Great poem I need that this morning
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Good one.
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what a great write and welcome
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great writing....you have talent...
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