Topic: Birth or Death???
Michael1427's photo
Wed 05/13/09 06:35 PM
So if there is anybody who can feel me,
Will you please stand up, for I seem to have lost my legs, or my hands
I can’t discern which
I am sliding through this suffocating cavern, darkness and warmth
My air has been drained
I feel as though my soul is vibrating out of my body
And my shell is twisted
I am pushed from my home
A wandering dog
Alone and hungry
Suddenly I am there
Only my head is free of its grasp
My lids have changed
It’s blinding
Strange new sensations finger over my awakening

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Wed 05/13/09 07:00 PM
Wow!!!:thumbsup:

Michael1427's photo
Tue 05/19/09 07:01 PM
Thank you ;-)

ItMightBeMe2's photo
Tue 05/19/09 07:03 PM
Very Nice Writeflowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 05/19/09 07:04 PM
U r born again!:heart:

Diamond4ever's photo
Wed 05/20/09 05:33 PM
Ethereal writeflowerforyou

Very different, in a good way

AngelLight's photo
Thu 05/21/09 06:20 AM
You have the talent to write short stories or publish a book flowerforyou

Michael1427's photo
Mon 05/25/09 06:02 PM
Thank you very much for the kinda kudos ;-)