Topic: Birth or Death??? | |
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So if there is anybody who can feel me,
Will you please stand up, for I seem to have lost my legs, or my hands I can’t discern which I am sliding through this suffocating cavern, darkness and warmth My air has been drained I feel as though my soul is vibrating out of my body And my shell is twisted I am pushed from my home A wandering dog Alone and hungry Suddenly I am there Only my head is free of its grasp My lids have changed It’s blinding Strange new sensations finger over my awakening Copywrite 2007 Use only with permission |
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Wow!!!
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Thank you ;-)
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Very Nice Write
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U r born again!
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Ethereal write
Very different, in a good way |
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You have the talent to write short stories or publish a book
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Thank you very much for the kinda kudos ;-)
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