Willing Captive

Never were I a knight of any form
For The dark hath been my armor
And mine persistance, my greatest virtue.
The torch once carried in anger
Now extinguished by the love
You give so complete and freely.

I stare into the deep pools of thine soul,
Basking in the warm comfort of being found.
You are mine lady of light,
Whom condemns my darker self
Into the obscurity of forgetfulness.

Thine eyes see within this heart
And sing away the rage once felt so deeply.
I tremble to thine touch,
So delicate and demure.
For you,
I am a willing captive
Held by the touch of your lips.

Thine hair flows as silken ribbons,
Riding upon the gentle winds;
Your voice is carried sweetly
And laid upon mine ear
To gently remind me
That you are.

Fadedspirit 5/12/2009

wonderful,so good to see you

"...To gently remind me
That you are."



I LOVE that ending

Nice Write.

Nice Faded!

Faded's found his mu-oo-se, faded's found his mu-oo-se!!!!!! Na-na-na-na-NA-nah,nah,nah-NAAAA blast what is the name of that song. Edit will be coming directly after I hunt it down on U-tube with the muppets!!!!!!

Ahhh, wrong consonant, drat it all!!!!! Mahna Mahna

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRRFfg2Guq4

Absolutely enchanting!

Aww, thanks pkh....Good to be back as well. Even if it is for just a while.

Hee hee Thanks AngelLight, I'm glad ya liked it. I thought that ending kinda summarized all the words into one thought myself.

thanks 2KidsMom, I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks d4tc.

LOL DKW. Mahna mahna ma That dude kinda looks like me too cept I don't have orange hair....lol *looks quietly for his moose* DOH!

Awww, thanks Lilypetal. I'm glad you liked it.

Ditto

and yes you have been away far to long