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the old man awakes
from the half sleep made difficult, still feeling bad sick as a dog they say, like it was a joke feeling better, given medicine reluctantly very, very, reluctantly he stands up, stretches coughs a little looks at the mess he's become his orange and gold striped fur ragged around the edges he jumps down weak, tired, yet still graceful walks to the open window and goes outside soon, he thinks, but not yet it's too nice to go he lays down on the deck in the sun and sleeps better |
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the old man awakes from the half sleep made difficult, still feeling bad sick as a dog they say, like it was a joke feeling better, given medicine reluctantly very, very, reluctantly he stands up, stretches coughs a little looks at the mess he's become his orange and gold striped fur ragged around the edges he jumps down weak, tired, yet still graceful walks to the open window and goes outside soon, he thinks, but not yet it's too nice to go he lays down on the deck in the sun and sleeps better such parallels |
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always enjoy your writes
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Very nice
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thank you all. the kitty seems to be a bit better, but you never know. he's 14.
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good write
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Very Nice
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an update...sad news, the kitty inquestion passed on thursday. i'm gonna miss him
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an update...sad news, the kitty inquestion passed on thursday. i'm gonna miss him Awwwwwwww ((((Dirk)))) I'm sorry to hear this. Hugs poetry friend. |
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