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LET'S FOR ONCE STOP THE THOUGHTS WE HAVE IN OUR MIND.
IS A FEELING ONE HAS TIME TO TIME? FOR EVERYBODY HAS GOOD & BAD THOUGHTS SOMEWHERE DOWN THERE LIFE LINE. WHEN THOUGHTS ARE GOOD, YOU'RE ON TOP OF THE WORLD HAPPY EAGER TO ASSIST. BUT WHEN THOUGHTS ARE BAD, YOU'RE DOWN, DEPRESSED, AND MAD READY TO PUT UP A FIST. WHEN ALL THOUGHTS ARE BAD AND SO HARD TO RESIST. MANY PEOPLE SAY, "YOU SHOULD SEE A PSYCHIATRIST.” WHICH PUZZLES ME, THE REASON IS THIS: YOUR THOUGHTS ARE YOURS AND NO ONE ELSES. ONLY YOU CAN MAKE THEM EXIST. SO WHAT DO YOU NEED FROM A PHSYCOTHERAPIST? ALL YOUR THOUGHTS, ALL YOUR FEELINGS, ALL YOUR ACTIONS. ARE YOURS, YOU BRING THEM TO BE. "THINK" WHO IS MORE QUALIFIED THAN YOU FOR YOUR PSYCOTHERAPY? WHAT I WRITE MAY NOT STANDOUT AND BE KNOWN. BUT THIS IS A THOUGHT A THOUGHT OF "MY OWN.” I HAVE GIVEN "MYSELF" PHYSCOTHERAPY WRITING THIS POEM. Scripted By Zo |
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Excellent...Much to take in from your writing....
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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LET'S FOR ONCE STOP THE THOUGHTS WE HAVE IN OUR MIND. IS A FEELING ONE HAS TIME TO TIME? FOR EVERYBODY HAS GOOD & BAD THOUGHTS SOMEWHERE DOWN THERE LIFE LINE. WHEN THOUGHTS ARE GOOD, YOU'RE ON TOP OF THE WORLD HAPPY EAGER TO ASSIST. BUT WHEN THOUGHTS ARE BAD, YOU'RE DOWN, DEPRESSED, AND MAD READY TO PUT UP A FIST. WHEN ALL THOUGHTS ARE BAD AND SO HARD TO RESIST. MANY PEOPLE SAY, "YOU SHOULD SEE A PSYCHIATRIST.” WHICH PUZZLES ME, THE REASON IS THIS: YOUR THOUGHTS ARE YOURS AND NO ONE ELSES. ONLY YOU CAN MAKE THEM EXIST. SO WHAT DO YOU NEED FROM A PHSYCOTHERAPIST? ALL YOUR THOUGHTS, ALL YOUR FEELINGS, ALL YOUR ACTIONS. ARE YOURS, YOU BRING THEM TO BE. "THINK" WHO IS MORE QUALIFIED THAN YOU FOR YOUR PSYCOTHERAPY? WHAT I WRITE MAY NOT STANDOUT AND BE KNOWN. BUT THIS IS A THOUGHT A THOUGHT OF "MY OWN.” I HAVE GIVEN "MYSELF" PHYSCOTHERAPY WRITING THIS POEM. Scripted By Zo This write is SLAMMIN' A_Zo.....and I love the ending! "WHO IS MORE QUALIFIED THAN YOU FOR YOUR PSYCOTHERAPY? WHAT I WRITE MAY NOT STANDOUT AND BE KNOWN. BUT THIS IS A THOUGHT A THOUGHT OF "MY OWN.” I HAVE GIVEN "MYSELF" PHYSCOTHERAPY WRITING THIS POEM." ![]() |
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Thank You for the "kudos" I read some of your writings and found them to be very intriguing & motivational pieces. I am honored you liked mine.
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Thank You, I have been writing since the 7th grade. i just started going to coffee houses and reading poetry on stage this year. I am touched you enjoyed my writing!
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That's great!
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Thank You I am sooooo glad you took the time to read my work , and most pleased you liked it. Thank You very much!
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I can imagine this with a cool beat. Is that how you intended it?
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No never thought to putting music to it, But I guess if there was a beat for it. It just might sound nice! Thanks for reading it man!
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