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Topic: Tormented
lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 12:54 AM
I'm running I'm blind Holding hands out What will I find? I'm feeling I'm cold Opening my heart To you can I hold? I'm hearing I'm confused Bearing my soul Will I be abused? I'm seeing I'm insane My heart on my sleeve Is it all in vain?

Dro_In_Indio Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 924	Tue 05/05/09 01:09 AM
Awesome... I had the impression of running when I read it... I love the feelings poetry gives

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 01:13 AM
I'm honored to have you get such a stron feeling from the words that I felt. Thanks (((A)))

MahanMahan Joined Wed 01/21/09 Posts: 5844	Tue 05/05/09 01:40 AM
I have had the pleasure of reading many of your poems. All are full of emotions, each one touching me in a different way. You are amazing, (((V.)))

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 05/05/09 02:39 AM
Love it!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 02:53 AM
(((Mahan)))

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 02:53 AM
Thanks Gossip!!

darkowl1 Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 13060	Tue 05/05/09 09:37 AM
huge ((((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))) to comfort you for that one,(and warm fuzzies too) my friend! you hit those feelings on the head!!!!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 05/05/09 09:38 AM
I'm running I'm blind Holding hands out What will I find? I'm feeling I'm cold Opening my heart To you can I hold? I'm hearing I'm confused Bearing my soul Will I be abused? I'm seeing I'm insane My heart on my sleeve Is it all in vain? Sending you lotsa love Beautiful

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/05/09 12:15 PM
I'm running I'm blind Holding hands out What will I find? I'm feeling I'm cold Opening my heart To you can I hold? I'm hearing I'm confused Bearing my soul Will I be abused? I'm seeing I'm insane My heart on my sleeve Is it all in vain? Yes, you can hold here, be held here, with Love

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 05:25 PM
huge ((((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))) to comfort you for that one,(and warm fuzzies too) my friend! you hit those feelings on the head!!!! (((((((((((((((V))))))))))))))) I'm gonna squash those feelers yet

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 05:25 PM
I'm running I'm blind Holding hands out What will I find? I'm feeling I'm cold Opening my heart To you can I hold? I'm hearing I'm confused Bearing my soul Will I be abused? I'm seeing I'm insane My heart on my sleeve Is it all in vain? Yes, you can hold here, be held here, with Love My love to you (((J))) I will hold gladly!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 05/05/09 05:28 PM
I'm running I'm blind Holding hands out What will I find? I'm feeling I'm cold Opening my heart To you can I hold? I'm hearing I'm confused Bearing my soul Will I be abused? I'm seeing I'm insane My heart on my sleeve Is it all in vain? Sending you lotsa love Beautiful I think I need a sit under the old Willow.

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