Topic: Bring on the pain
dlawson12's photo
Sat 05/02/09 08:28 PM
Let me know what you all think, I know I need more pictures....

EZ4Sheezy's photo
Sun 05/03/09 10:08 AM
Omit the last sentence and elaborate on the rest

dlawson12's photo
Sun 05/03/09 10:34 AM
updated... any feedback would be welcome and appreciated.

bastet126's photo
Sun 05/03/09 10:43 AM
hmmm...you seem to be saying the same thing just with different twists. so maybe take out some of the slow to open up stuff and accentuant your strenths! tell us more about what you're looking for too! good luck!

EZ4Sheezy's photo
Sun 05/03/09 01:04 PM
Edited by EZ4Sheezy on Sun 05/03/09 01:07 PM
Better, but I agree with bastet, still need to omit the "slow to open...", and the "not one to volunteer..."

That's what the profile is for, to volunteer information. You seem like a decent guy to me. There's gotta be some information not to be kept secret.

You're getting there. I'm just a hardass when it comes to rating these things. I like to offer constructive criticism rather than praise a weak profile, and hope that's how you take it rather than thinking I'm just being an A-hole.

dlawson12's photo
Sun 05/03/09 02:21 PM
Of course! Thank you both for the reply and honesty.

no photo
Sun 05/03/09 05:14 PM
A lil pain never hurt anybody...:wink: