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Flower Petals you cant put a flower back together once its torn apart. you cant put back the years , once they've begun to start. you cannot chase those constant fears , quench your thirst with endless tears. climb a mountain , touch the stars , make a wish , wind up on mars. pray to God for constant sleep , in my dreams our souls do keep. wakeful dreams are bitter sweet , wondering how we'll finally meet. pondering quietly through my days , wandering listlessly on endless nights. restless in my life I feel , try to keep it from fading , and losing zeal . sleeping , waking......, sustenance , waiting for whats held in chance . as my pedals unfold , I want forever you to hold , and as they fall I want you to catch , keep me together , dont let me detach. |
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Purple your words are so impressive-I love reading your
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((((( Purple )))))
Outstanding,, you amaze me with your Beauty, grace, love of life and never giving up,,, I love you Girl |
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Wow...now there is TALENT!
I will be looking for your poems more often, Im sorry I didn't sooner. |
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(((((((((((((((((((K))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Beautiful..... You are sooo very talented! Keep writing.... Much Love... Your Friend, SCG... |
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I sure liked the meter in your poem, Purple..Excellent!!
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maybe I should start puttin these to music ?
some days the words just fall into place , comes as natural as sun on the face , putting to words , with such grace , taking the reader into my space , on a read through a journey to some other place . pause for a bit and watch a different race . think maybe a little and change your own pace . shed a different light on the dreams which we chase . |
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