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I wrote this poem one day when I was down on myself a while back. I look back and see how depressing it was but it was a good one no less. It's like a reminder about bad times when friends/lovers leave and heartbroken dreams. I hope you all can enjoy it. If you can relate to whats being said feel free to reply to it as any feedback will be appreciated. It's pretty personal but I don't mind sharing it with you all.
Thanks, Randy --------------------------------------------------------------------- -Black and White- No more colors to fill in these lines. With all the emotions I think I'll go blind. Have you ever felt the sting of a hard days rain? Have you ever felt these multiple shifting pains? When anger leaves you what do you have left? Sadness and agony mixed with a little regret. A scewered heart and a broken mind. A hole in your soul unhealable by time. No more colors only black and white that I see. I'll sail through the ocean of my shattered dreams. It's been a while since I have shed a tear. I think It's time to let out the frustration I fear. What is happening, and how could this be? Is it better for them to just up and leave me? I have so much to give and I ask so little. Why does the heart only speak in riddles? When I look deeper inside here is what I see. A broken mirror, a clock that has stopped, and a colorless key. It's not too hard to figure out or too deep to read. You just only need to know a few things about me. The broken mirror is what I think of myself. The clock thats stopped is the time that is left. The colorless key belongs to my heart. The emotions that are inside rip me apart. I am looking for color to fill in those lines. A sense of purpose and a piece of mind. A love so pure that won't fade away. I am so tired of feeling this shade of gray. --------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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Wow thats deep
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Great Write!
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very nice and heartfelt...thanks for sharing and welcome to Mingle2.
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"The broken mirror is what I think of myself.
The clock thats stopped is the time that is left. The colorless key belongs to my heart. The emotions that are inside rip me apart. I am looking for color to fill in those lines. A sense of purpose and a piece of mind. A love so pure that won't fade away. I am so tired of feeling this shade of gray." Wow. Powerful Ty for sharing .... |
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So much emotion in this poem, I am feeling it....
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I wrote this poem one day when I was down on myself a while back. I look back and see how depressing it was but it was a good one no less. It's like a reminder about bad times when friends/lovers leave and heartbroken dreams. I hope you all can enjoy it. If you can relate to whats being said feel free to reply to it as any feedback will be appreciated. It's pretty personal but I don't mind sharing it with you all. Thanks, Randy --------------------------------------------------------------------- -Black and White- No more colors to fill in these lines. With all the emotions I think I'll go blind. Have you ever felt the sting of a hard days rain? Have you ever felt these multiple shifting pains? When anger leaves you what do you have left? Sadness and agony mixed with a little regret. A scewered heart and a broken mind. A hole in your soul unhealable by time. No more colors only black and white that I see. I'll sail through the ocean of my shattered dreams. It's been a while since I have shed a tear. I think It's time to let out the frustration I fear. What is happening, and how could this be? Is it better for them to just up and leave me? I have so much to give and I ask so little. Why does the heart only speak in riddles? When I look deeper inside here is what I see. A broken mirror, a clock that has stopped, and a colorless key. It's not too hard to figure out or too deep to read. You just only need to know a few things about me. The broken mirror is what I think of myself. The clock thats stopped is the time that is left. The colorless key belongs to my heart. The emotions that are inside rip me apart. I am looking for color to fill in those lines. A sense of purpose and a piece of mind. A love so pure that won't fade away. I am so tired of feeling this shade of gray. --------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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Thanks everybody!
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wow--wonderful!
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