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Topic: My Heart
plk1966's photo
Tue 04/21/09 07:05 PM
When I see you I can feel you
In my soul - my heart takes flight.

I can hardly wait to be with you
In the darkness of the night.

I feel your breath so hot and sweet
Circling in my soul.

When our hearts come to meet
It's then that I feel whole.
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Tue 04/21/09 07:10 PM
Very Nice...(((plk)))..flowerforyou flowerforyou
MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 04/21/09 07:14 PM

When I see you I can feel you
In my soul - my heart takes flight.

I can hardly wait to be with you
In the darkness of the night.

I feel your breath so hot and sweet
Circling in my soul.

When our hearts come to meet
It's then that I feel whole.
flowerforyou
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Tue 04/21/09 07:16 PM
WOW! ((((P)))) that was great:heart: flowerforyou
Sounds like all is well in your neck of the woods :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana:
kingme242's photo
Tue 04/21/09 07:17 PM
flowerforyou
plk1966's photo
Tue 04/21/09 07:21 PM
Edited by plk1966 on Tue 04/21/09 07:22 PM

WOW! ((((P)))) that was great:heart: flowerforyou
Sounds like all is well in your neck of the woods :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana:


Thanks (((((BIll)))))flowerforyou


I wish laugh laugh
plk1966's photo
Tue 04/21/09 07:21 PM

Very Nice...(((plk)))..flowerforyou flowerforyou


Thank youflowerforyou
plk1966's photo
Tue 04/21/09 07:23 PM


When I see you I can feel you
In my soul - my heart takes flight.

I can hardly wait to be with you
In the darkness of the night.

I feel your breath so hot and sweet
Circling in my soul.

When our hearts come to meet
It's then that I feel whole.
flowerforyou


Thanks dollflowerforyou
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Tue 04/21/09 07:24 PM


WOW! ((((P)))) that was great:heart: flowerforyou
Sounds like all is well in your neck of the woods :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana:


Thanks (((((BIll)))))flowerforyou


I wish laugh laugh


"Who you trying to kid" he says in a southern accentflowerforyou
Whats up in the great state of Pa
plk1966's photo
Tue 04/21/09 07:26 PM



WOW! ((((P)))) that was great:heart: flowerforyou
Sounds like all is well in your neck of the woods :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana:


Thanks (((((BIll)))))flowerforyou


I wish laugh laugh


"Who you trying to kid" he says in a southern accentflowerforyou
Whats up in the great state of Pa


laugh laugh Love that accentlove

you have an emailflowers
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Tue 04/21/09 07:31 PM




WOW! ((((P)))) that was great:heart: flowerforyou
Sounds like all is well in your neck of the woods :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana:


Thanks (((((BIll)))))flowerforyou


I wish laugh laugh


"Who you trying to kid" he says in a southern accentflowerforyou
Whats up in the great state of Pa


laugh laugh Love that accentlove

you have an emailflowers




You mean had a email
Pete026's photo
Tue 04/21/09 08:16 PM
Very nice :smile: flowerforyou
no photo
Tue 04/21/09 08:20 PM

When I see you I can feel you
In my soul - my heart takes flight.

I can hardly wait to be with you
In the darkness of the night.

I feel your breath so hot and sweet
Circling in my soul.

When our hearts come to meet
It's then that I feel whole.



Very well done Patti........:thumbsup: flowerforyou
plk1966's photo
Tue 04/21/09 09:16 PM
Thank you PETE and MICHELLEflowers

it was my real first attempt at writing
d4tc's photo
Wed 04/22/09 08:20 AM
Nicely Done flowerforyou Sweet and Simple.
MzEm's photo
Wed 04/22/09 08:22 AM
How sweet...
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Wed 04/22/09 08:23 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou
LightVoice's photo
Wed 04/22/09 08:29 AM


Absolutely LOVED it {{{{{{{{Patti-Cakes}}}}} :heart:
Seems you are a woman of MANY talents my dear flowerforyou
plk1966's photo
Wed 04/22/09 10:48 AM
Thank you everyone for your kind words of encouragementflowers
LAMom's photo
Wed 04/22/09 10:49 AM
Welllllllllllllllllllllllll I think you should be writing more

Bravoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo flowerforyou flowerforyou
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